A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Naked and Unafraid"Assorted poems of love
20 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Since the fall of man in the garden of Eden, we have felt uncomfortable when nude and totally exposed. Sometimes even in the company of those we trust the most. It stems from feeling totally vulnerable when completely naked...and we are--totally vulnerable. But when two share a love and passion for each others touch much as you've so perfectly described here, all of that vulnerability, tentativeness and pent up inhibitions melt away into longing, passion and pleasure.
This is very tastefully done, Missy, and simply conveys how romance should be when two people are totally engrossed in the throes of passion.
Best of luck to you in the contest. ~Dean
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Since the fall of man in the garden of Eden, we have felt uncomfortable when nude and totally exposed. Sometimes even in the company of those we trust the most. It stems from feeling totally vulnerable when completely naked...and we are--totally vulnerable. But when two share a love and passion for each others touch much as you've so perfectly described here, all of that vulnerability, tentativeness and pent up inhibitions melt away into longing, passion and pleasure.
This is very tastefully done, Missy, and simply conveys how romance should be when two people are totally engrossed in the throes of passion.
Best of luck to you in the contest. ~Dean
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Dean, you know who much I respect your writing and for you to say this is done well...well heck fire that just makes me happier than a pig in shit :) lol. I honestly feel myself growing as a writer here and it's all because of the wonderful feedback that I get. Not only from my wonderful and supportive fans but from those I have never fanned.
Thanks again sugga.
Always,
Missy
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Anytime, Missy. You're very welcome. ~Dean :)
Comment from l.raven
HI Justafan, this is very sensually written...you can feel every breath taken...I love your poem...and the picture stunning...luff Linda xxoo good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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HI Justafan, this is very sensually written...you can feel every breath taken...I love your poem...and the picture stunning...luff Linda xxoo good luck in the contest
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Wink;-) thanks Linda for the very encouraging review
Hugs,
Missy
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you are so very welcome Missy...big hugs back at ya...luff xxoo
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Now if this wasn't able to get ones passion flowing then you have no passion at all. This flowed right into my Hummm Ok imagination Now when you can do that It is something to be admired
tk
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Now if this wasn't able to get ones passion flowing then you have no passion at all. This flowed right into my Hummm Ok imagination Now when you can do that It is something to be admired
tk
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Heehee...you're a passionate man yourself Sir Knight... :)
Thank you for coming to my aid again with a wonderful review!!!
Hugs
Missy
Comment from Unspoken94
For a woman to be naked and unafraid says much about that woman. She may be vulnerable but not with lack of self esteem and confidence.
Excellent poem on a woman's experience.
bill.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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For a woman to be naked and unafraid says much about that woman. She may be vulnerable but not with lack of self esteem and confidence.
Excellent poem on a woman's experience.
bill.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Bill, I want to say thank you very much for the sweet review of my work.
Always,
Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there sweet Missy
Holy shit, this is SEXY
and VERY erotic. I could go to jail
for what I conjured up in my mind
The artwork is supreme as well
I can taste your hot mouth
Bear
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Hello there sweet Missy
Holy shit, this is SEXY
and VERY erotic. I could go to jail
for what I conjured up in my mind
The artwork is supreme as well
I can taste your hot mouth
Bear
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Lol Bear... Don't go to jail.
Thanks for the enthusiastic review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, sure sounds like there was going to be a big time in the old town that night. Now, I'm just wondering if your knees going weak from what you saw was for a good reason, or not. Thanks for the pleasure of another fine poem. Darn it, how could I already be out of sixes so soon.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Wow, sure sounds like there was going to be a big time in the old town that night. Now, I'm just wondering if your knees going weak from what you saw was for a good reason, or not. Thanks for the pleasure of another fine poem. Darn it, how could I already be out of sixes so soon.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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LMAO Ric... In answer to your question... She got IN the bed :)
Your lively comment was better than a 6.
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a dazzling poem, Missy, powerful in its directness. Nothing the reader needs to go look up. It's all there laid out on the screen, naked and vulnerable.
I'm glad I got to read this. It should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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This is a dazzling poem, Missy, powerful in its directness. Nothing the reader needs to go look up. It's all there laid out on the screen, naked and vulnerable.
I'm glad I got to read this. It should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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I'm so glad you stopped by and read it too Jay.
I'm leery of the site sponsored contests but was encouraged to enter.
Hugs
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Very seductive and sensual writing :) I love the artwork you put with this. The title caught my eye, and the writing explained the rest. The part where you write, 'You hold the sheet open, I glimpse your body, My knees go weak .... that says so much that I can actually think of something visual. You have a wonderful way with words.
Shana :)
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Very seductive and sensual writing :) I love the artwork you put with this. The title caught my eye, and the writing explained the rest. The part where you write, 'You hold the sheet open, I glimpse your body, My knees go weak .... that says so much that I can actually think of something visual. You have a wonderful way with words.
Shana :)
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Ah, Shana, your review brought a smile to my face. Thanks so much hon.
Missy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Lovely dance you're doing in your poem. This is very well written. It paints a lovely picture on your canvas. Best wishes in the contest. I love the artwork too.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Lovely dance you're doing in your poem. This is very well written. It paints a lovely picture on your canvas. Best wishes in the contest. I love the artwork too.
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you, sweetie. I have a long time to wait on this contest...and as this is my first FREE VERSE...I am terrified. Thanks again for stopping by and leaving this wonderfully encouraging review my sweet friend.
Always
Missy
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You did a wonderful job. No need to be terrified. Your welcome. :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements and then some. It is a well penned free verse with stunning emotion and imagery evoked within the reader's mind. It is not flowery or frilly, but speaks to the simple essence of life in graceful eloquence. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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This meets the contest requirements and then some. It is a well penned free verse with stunning emotion and imagery evoked within the reader's mind. It is not flowery or frilly, but speaks to the simple essence of life in graceful eloquence. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much...so very much. I am so humbled by your wonderful review and the Exceptional rating. I am on the verge of tears here. :)
Always
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Bless you