I'm Not Beggin
Lost that lovin feelin16 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
Author: a clear winner, here. You hurt me but I'll knock you out . . . I love it! Take no prisoners, watch out for you! I love it. No "oh woe is me" here. Plain language of what you get it what you deserve. You got my vote! livelylinda
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Author: a clear winner, here. You hurt me but I'll knock you out . . . I love it! Take no prisoners, watch out for you! I love it. No "oh woe is me" here. Plain language of what you get it what you deserve. You got my vote! livelylinda
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Oh gee thanks for the splendid review and lovely 6er.
Smiling thanks also for the vote :)
Comment from lancellot
A very funny ending. I know it was supposed to be sad, but the fire made laugh. Love may be perfect but people sure are not. Well done.
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A very funny ending. I know it was supposed to be sad, but the fire made laugh. Love may be perfect but people sure are not. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thanks! I am glad you like the ending :)
I am smiling now!
Always
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous,
Wow, a little too aggresive for me.~I'm Not Beggin~ is about the anger that we feel when someone we loved leaves us. Good job!
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Hello anonymous,
Wow, a little too aggresive for me.~I'm Not Beggin~ is about the anger that we feel when someone we loved leaves us. Good job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Sometimes that is just the way we feel...not necessarily acted on hon. Thanks for the review though. I haven't harmed anyone YET!!!lmao
Always,
Comment from pbroussard209
Lol, now that's the spirit. Some people are take, take, take and give nothing in return. I have dated many men like this but as soon as I figured them out I was out of there.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Lol, now that's the spirit. Some people are take, take, take and give nothing in return. I have dated many men like this but as soon as I figured them out I was out of there.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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I see it all the time with my friends in poker...romances start at the table and the next thing ya know BOOM a new name is hon or baby...hence the cockiness remark. Thanks for the understanding review sug.
Always,
Comment from Nosha17
I guess some people push their luck, but not sure if physical reaction is the best solution, maybe ignoring would work better. Your words convey the feeling of frustration at wasted effort on someone who is not worth it. Good use of rhyming, good luck in the contest. Faye
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I guess some people push their luck, but not sure if physical reaction is the best solution, maybe ignoring would work better. Your words convey the feeling of frustration at wasted effort on someone who is not worth it. Good use of rhyming, good luck in the contest. Faye
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you Faye. I wrote this after watching a friend be treated like crap by a womanizer.
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There are definitely a lot of heels out there, male and female. I prefer the company of a dog any day!! Faye
Comment from JCarriger
Wow - with no restrictions you don't hold it to mechanics of poetry but instead make a bold statement in art. Love the "high 5" but the reality part of the sad poem is so well imaged. You ask a good question of some men. Then stated a real and usual possibility. You wrapped it with a clear understanding of a strong woman. I liked the whole of it and your spirit coming through the tears. Or was that something in your eye?
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Wow - with no restrictions you don't hold it to mechanics of poetry but instead make a bold statement in art. Love the "high 5" but the reality part of the sad poem is so well imaged. You ask a good question of some men. Then stated a real and usual possibility. You wrapped it with a clear understanding of a strong woman. I liked the whole of it and your spirit coming through the tears. Or was that something in your eye?
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the smile and the review, mam:) Was something in his eye more than likely...lol.
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