2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "haiku ( viewing a cold grave )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from Glasstruth
Like thealliteration in the second line. Also the white font on the black background adds to the huanting spirit that this is. Well crafted. Good luck with the contest. Les
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Like thealliteration in the second line. Also the white font on the black background adds to the huanting spirit that this is. Well crafted. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you Les :)
Comment from ellie6
Some would say that using a grave as a focus for a poem is unusual, but for someone like Edgar Allan Poe, who was a renowned author, believed by some to be the father of the horror story, it is a matter of historical interest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Some would say that using a grave as a focus for a poem is unusual, but for someone like Edgar Allan Poe, who was a renowned author, believed by some to be the father of the horror story, it is a matter of historical interest.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you Ellie :)
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting tribute to Edgar Allen Poe and his Raven.
Poem has the required syllable count.
It is thought-provoking. good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Interesting tribute to Edgar Allen Poe and his Raven.
Poem has the required syllable count.
It is thought-provoking. good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you mvgrooks :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, I happen to adore ravens (and Poe's work) myself, Anonymous Poet, immensely. So, I'm not so sure I would consider it a bad omen for me. But, I'm sure many others would disagree.
Nice take from Poe's classic epic, "The Raven". Excellent presentation for effect.
Good work, and good luck. ~Dean :}
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Well, I happen to adore ravens (and Poe's work) myself, Anonymous Poet, immensely. So, I'm not so sure I would consider it a bad omen for me. But, I'm sure many others would disagree.
Nice take from Poe's classic epic, "The Raven". Excellent presentation for effect.
Good work, and good luck. ~Dean :}
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you for a very detailed and positive review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This haiku has all the contest requirements fulfilled . I like your satori line. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~~~
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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This haiku has all the contest requirements fulfilled . I like your satori line. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~~~
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you for a positive review. I appreciate it very much.