Teasing You So Tenderly
Some loving by the fireplace30 total reviews
Comment from boxergirl
And we are glad we get to enjoy a little of your risqué behavior, vicariously of course. :-)
"Let the heat of our passion be impossible to tame" is a great line.
Karen 8-)
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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And we are glad we get to enjoy a little of your risqué behavior, vicariously of course. :-)
"Let the heat of our passion be impossible to tame" is a great line.
Karen 8-)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks much Lady K..I am also glad you liked my romantic interlude even though it was vicariously hehehe
TK
Comment from krys123
TK;
-for writing this on a blistery day the writing in itself is very warm and comforting and so very romantic, also.
-Your rhyming words are contingent to the meeting and concept of each line therefore making the reading and rhythm flow smoothly.
-The rhythmic cadence, timing and tempo wall equally helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-You're right locally romantic writings TK and always I enjoy them immensely.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever my friend and it goes for all you view even the little barkers.
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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TK;
-for writing this on a blistery day the writing in itself is very warm and comforting and so very romantic, also.
-Your rhyming words are contingent to the meeting and concept of each line therefore making the reading and rhythm flow smoothly.
-The rhythmic cadence, timing and tempo wall equally helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-You're right locally romantic writings TK and always I enjoy them immensely.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever my friend and it goes for all you view even the little barkers.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Alex..It was a fun one to write as I had to use my memory from times gone by lol
TK
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You are so welcome TK
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Now if all men could kindle the fire like that there would be tons more happy females strolling about. This is wonderfully penned and deliciously sensual without crossing the lines of good taste by staying within purely poetic bounds. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Well thank you so much my Mystic Angel for you kind and encouraging words..I am glad you enjoyed Now lets hope I can keep those fire kindling with my next one lol
TK
Comment from angelface2
Ah, TK, this may be a little risqué, but it is so lovely. Making love by firelight, what a lovely thought. I never got the chance to try it. Boohoo! Dreams can only take you so far. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Ah, TK, this may be a little risqué, but it is so lovely. Making love by firelight, what a lovely thought. I never got the chance to try it. Boohoo! Dreams can only take you so far. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Ms Sally Ah dreams can take you away now can't they Seems I have one floating around some where that say the same thing lol
tk
Comment from Ekim777
Very passionate and sentimental but the rhyme scheme seems a little forced. Do I detect a little loneliness between the lines and on whose behalf? As those passion-red letters emerge from the inky-dark back-drop I wonder what is so good about modern times. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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Very passionate and sentimental but the rhyme scheme seems a little forced. Do I detect a little loneliness between the lines and on whose behalf? As those passion-red letters emerge from the inky-dark back-drop I wonder what is so good about modern times. -Ekim777
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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The Rhyme scheme may be off a bit true....But it sure worked for me hehehe Thanks for the review my friend..No loneliness at all Ekim just a smile lol
TK
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
A beautiful poem of love and compassion that deserves a "6". Hope wherever you drift, you will have a fireplace to keep warm or a fan to keep you cool.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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Aloha ATK,
A beautiful poem of love and compassion that deserves a "6". Hope wherever you drift, you will have a fireplace to keep warm or a fan to keep you cool.
Aloha,
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much for the #6 HW yes I believe I will drift to where that fireplace burns in the winter and where the fan will cool me down on a warm summer eve..
Hugs
TK
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I like your ditty and how you get inspire by a rainy night
Wish I had a fireplace
sounds like a cozy place to make love.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Hello and smiles A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I like your ditty and how you get inspire by a rainy night
Wish I had a fireplace
sounds like a cozy place to make love.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Lady Gert... Glad I have a great imagination as well as right now I do not have a fireplace either BUUUUUT I have a great memory lol
tk
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I like your response tk
Good one
Gert
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation--the artwork is perfect, the color scheme is fitting, and your rhyme is super. There is great flow to the lines.
The message is strong and not to risqué.
I see no changes.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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This is a great presentation--the artwork is perfect, the color scheme is fitting, and your rhyme is super. There is great flow to the lines.
The message is strong and not to risqué.
I see no changes.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Janny I am so glad you enjoyed my romantic interlude lol
tk
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi T.K.,
Hm...now I'm wondering if your were a sort of playboy before your found your true love.
This is very tender and sweet. The only thing I object to is the fireplace because it's so damn hot here in Houston, LOL.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Hi T.K.,
Hm...now I'm wondering if your were a sort of playboy before your found your true love.
This is very tender and sweet. The only thing I object to is the fireplace because it's so damn hot here in Houston, LOL.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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AH Lady Lou I have stayed in Houston in the summertime and I know just how hot muggy it can get. Now as me finding true love well that now is another poem ready to be written... another chapter ending but another one waiting to begin..
tkHa ha
Comment from nomi338
Nice. Looks like you've still got it old boy. This is nice and seductive, I believe it is just the kind of thing a young and lovely, sweet and tender, young or maybe not so young woman might like to hear from and older, wiser and experienced lover. Go getem' tiger.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Nice. Looks like you've still got it old boy. This is nice and seductive, I believe it is just the kind of thing a young and lovely, sweet and tender, young or maybe not so young woman might like to hear from and older, wiser and experienced lover. Go getem' tiger.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Ha ha Mr Nomi you always make me smile with your comments and this is no exception... Thank you so much for the kind and insight fulness of your words lol
tk