A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Color Me"Assorted poems of love
19 total reviews
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Missy friend
Someone created a very unusual and interesting piece of artwork, which went so nicely with your beautiful and lovely romantic poem.
I enjoyed, Loyd
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hello Missy friend
Someone created a very unusual and interesting piece of artwork, which went so nicely with your beautiful and lovely romantic poem.
I enjoyed, Loyd
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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In fact the art work inspired the poem my dear friend. :)
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving this well received review.
Always,
Missy
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You are very welcome, Loyd
Comment from meggie13
Very colorful love poem with a fantastic picture to make your words shine. I like your repetition of : So I won't ever be forgotten. Flows very nicely from line to line . Add the song :" Color my World" and you will be remembered more. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxarwzuFEug
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Very colorful love poem with a fantastic picture to make your words shine. I like your repetition of : So I won't ever be forgotten. Flows very nicely from line to line . Add the song :" Color my World" and you will be remembered more. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxarwzuFEug
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hi hon... How do I add music???
Help!!
Love ya!!
Missy
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Missy, sorry I do not know how to download the music , I may know somebody who does. I will get back to you tomorrow .Love you too,mom
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Ty Mom... Night night
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Ty Mom... Night night
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Ty Mom... Night night
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Good night, sweet dreams Missy .
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Good night, sweet dreams Missy .
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Missy, sorry I do not know how to download the music , I may know somebody who does. I will get back to you tomorrow .Love you too,mom
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The artwork for this poem is stunning.
-The poem is written very well with so many vivid color images and interpretations of each.
-The message is also good and the rhyme provides a flow to the poem.
-The first two lines begin the poem very well and the whole poem becomes a lovely painting with words.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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-The artwork for this poem is stunning.
-The poem is written very well with so many vivid color images and interpretations of each.
-The message is also good and the rhyme provides a flow to the poem.
-The first two lines begin the poem very well and the whole poem becomes a lovely painting with words.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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I am smiling right now reading this review. Your enjoyment adds music to my ears :)
Missy
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I am glad you are smiling, as that is a good thing, along with music:)
Comment from ellie6
A hopeful little poem. All the colours of nature are incorporated in this poem, she asks for permanence and remembrance. A beautiful expression of living colours.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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A hopeful little poem. All the colours of nature are incorporated in this poem, she asks for permanence and remembrance. A beautiful expression of living colours.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much, E. Your review is welcomed and appreciated I assure you :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow! i really like this colorful poem - so full of imagery. I like what each color stands for. Beautifully done:)
teresa
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Wow! i really like this colorful poem - so full of imagery. I like what each color stands for. Beautifully done:)
teresa
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hi T... Thanks hon :) The pic pulled this one from me.
I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Always,
Missy
Comment from RooBoo
Mmmm, I can't even describe what this makes me feel! Truly beautiful! All I know is that I can feel the depths of this one day through finding love. I want to be a piece of art that love can create. Simply amazing!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Mmmm, I can't even describe what this makes me feel! Truly beautiful! All I know is that I can feel the depths of this one day through finding love. I want to be a piece of art that love can create. Simply amazing!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hi cutie pie (yes I peeked), thanks for the warm and well received review sug.
I will repay you in kind :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
This was very beautiful Lady M..A moving loving piece for sure..You wove it together like a master seamstress ... I think just maybe this might add to it...
Since you used "so I won't ever be forgotten" in two different places way not end it with it also... Repeat the first line on the end..I think it would give it even more impact..Just a thought as it stands right now it's very good
Hugs
tk
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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This was very beautiful Lady M..A moving loving piece for sure..You wove it together like a master seamstress ... I think just maybe this might add to it...
Since you used "so I won't ever be forgotten" in two different places way not end it with it also... Repeat the first line on the end..I think it would give it even more impact..Just a thought as it stands right now it's very good
Hugs
tk
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Thank you TK...
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely use of color to express emotion. I thought it flowed beautifully and had a lyrical meter to the rhythm of the rhyme scheme. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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This is a lovely use of color to express emotion. I thought it flowed beautifully and had a lyrical meter to the rhythm of the rhyme scheme. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Thank you punkin...The picture spoke to me and I didn't know I had released it without a promotion and more fanstory bucks attached. I am trying to review some and get the coin to promote so comeback and get it ...:)
Missy
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Coin is not nearly as important to me as the enjoyment of the reading and the offering of encouragement. BUT I know it is the be all end all for some LOL.
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You are so very correct. I just like to give back a trifle to those who give so freely of their time and expertise :). I greatly value your opinion hon.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Where my heart and love of nature [my] may coincide------Did you mean "may" coincide here, Missy? I think your "a" went AWOL, lol...
For me, the color of grace would be a violet or purplish hue...
I love the photo art which obviously inspired you to write this wonderfully intriguing poem on colors associated with emotions...
Excellent! ~Dean :}
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Where my heart and love of nature [my] may coincide------Did you mean "may" coincide here, Missy? I think your "a" went AWOL, lol...
For me, the color of grace would be a violet or purplish hue...
I love the photo art which obviously inspired you to write this wonderfully intriguing poem on colors associated with emotions...
Excellent! ~Dean :}
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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dang it...I didn't think I had released this...grrr. Thanks for the review and yes that is a boo boo...I am on it!!!
Always,
Missy
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come back in a few and get some coin for a review hon...I have to review some stuff to make some fanstory bucks...I hate this was released with out a promotion...don't know how it happened..grrr
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I'd read your work for nothin', Missy, because I enjoy it.
~Dean :}
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I've done the same thing before. No worries, my friend. :}
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And I would give you a big ol smooch right now too!!! :)
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:-{} ...........Pucker up, heh-heh...
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:-{}....mwaaaahh...oh u a good kisser...lmao