Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I take it that Dave is still in the plane? It's a bad day for all three of them. Both men die and Neil's wife looses a husband and a lover.
I don't see anything to correct or change.
Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you, bd, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Great title that complements your 100 word story perfectly. It has an start, middle and ending as it should. The chute won't open, you suspect foul play. That surely might be the case.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

A story of true revenge in 100 words. A lesson also to be learned: you reap what you sow-never a good idea as this guy found out. Well written within the confines of the word count. Faye

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015

Thank you, Nosha, for the excellent review. Bill