Christine's Poems
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Comment from Amy Greta
Superb opposites attract poem! Every line is a such a relatable description of how you all are different, many even made me chuckle like:
"I love the country life, you are city bred
I love our great big house, you love your shed."
So typical (I'm assuming you are the first part and your male companion the second) of a man to like his man-cave shed!
Your poem is light-hearted and almost like a song.
I really enjoyed it!
~Amy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
Superb opposites attract poem! Every line is a such a relatable description of how you all are different, many even made me chuckle like:
"I love the country life, you are city bred
I love our great big house, you love your shed."
So typical (I'm assuming you are the first part and your male companion the second) of a man to like his man-cave shed!
Your poem is light-hearted and almost like a song.
I really enjoyed it!
~Amy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thank you amygreta for having a read and giving me a review, yes I'm the first part and hubby is second ( and he would probably live in the shed if he could ,it's not bad either lol ) I am glad you had a chuckle that makes my day too. Cheers C
Comment from erspring
this was nicely done
the rhyming in the poem was catchy
I like your answers to opposites attract.
it really is a great poem
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
this was nicely done
the rhyming in the poem was catchy
I like your answers to opposites attract.
it really is a great poem
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Wow thank you so very much for your fabulous review and rating. I'm so glad you like this and appreciate you time I had fun writing this Cheers C
Comment from mermaids
All I can say is wow! This is a poem that is a challenge to create but you did quite well. Love the ending of opposites attract. I know that you love me and that is a fact is a wonderful line that gives the reader a good feeling and adds to the smooth feeling and flow of the poem. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
All I can say is wow! This is a poem that is a challenge to create but you did quite well. Love the ending of opposites attract. I know that you love me and that is a fact is a wonderful line that gives the reader a good feeling and adds to the smooth feeling and flow of the poem. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thank you mermaids I'm glad you like this and thanks for your great feedback, I had fun writing this. It was nice of you to read and review Cheers C
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Thank you mermaids I'm glad you like this and thanks for your great feedback, I had fun writing this. It was nice of you to read and review Cheers C
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a truly wonderful entry for this particular competition, The way you have presented your poem is great with the true opposites really attracting. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
Hi Mystery author, this is a truly wonderful entry for this particular competition, The way you have presented your poem is great with the true opposites really attracting. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thank you Eric for reading and reviewing my poem I hope it meets the brief and I appreciate your lovely comments and good wishes Cheers C
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I saw no problems with the brief my friend.
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Thanks
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork to complement your poem. It does that very well. I liked all the differences you described in a poetic way between you and your other half. Best wishes for the prompt.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
Excellent artwork to complement your poem. It does that very well. I liked all the differences you described in a poetic way between you and your other half. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thanks robina1978 for reviewing this poem and for your encouraging words Cheers C
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Thanks robina1978 for reviewing this poem and for your encouraging words Cheers C
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Thanks robina1978 for reviewing this poem and for your encouraging words Cheers C