2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "haiku (sweet heavy air burns)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
17 total reviews
Comment from K. Lorraine
This was a wonderful poem...
The pictures are gorgeous...
I loved every moment of reading this outstanding contest entry.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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This was a wonderful poem...
The pictures are gorgeous...
I loved every moment of reading this outstanding contest entry.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you k lorraine, I appreciate your review.
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you are welcome
Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork in this, and best of luck in the contest. I love the farm sounds--very nostalgic, as I grew up on a farm. You have followed the Haiku format perfectly with 5-7-5 syllable count. Your words are well chosen and I really liked "dancing waves." very descriptive. Fine concluding line. judi
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Lovely artwork in this, and best of luck in the contest. I love the farm sounds--very nostalgic, as I grew up on a farm. You have followed the Haiku format perfectly with 5-7-5 syllable count. Your words are well chosen and I really liked "dancing waves." very descriptive. Fine concluding line. judi
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you judi, I appreciate your review.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Gert sherwood
What a unique way to tell the reader of hot humid air turn the fields to gold as the farmer waits to harvest the golden crops
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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What a unique way to tell the reader of hot humid air turn the fields to gold as the farmer waits to harvest the golden crops
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Gert, I appreciate your review. :)
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smiles
Gert
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love seeing the wheat fields. In spring they are nice and green and then they turn that beautiful golden color and they sway in the wind. Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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I love seeing the wheat fields. In spring they are nice and green and then they turn that beautiful golden color and they sway in the wind. Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Gypsy...
_ This is beautifully composed and presented.
_ Love the artwork, and with your nature music, I felt as if I were there in the scene.
_ When I played the video, the tweeting birds actually sounded as if they were coming from the TV! Super job.
_ Enjoyed this very much.
_ Good luck with your super contest entry.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Hi, Gypsy...
_ This is beautifully composed and presented.
_ Love the artwork, and with your nature music, I felt as if I were there in the scene.
_ When I played the video, the tweeting birds actually sounded as if they were coming from the TV! Super job.
_ Enjoyed this very much.
_ Good luck with your super contest entry.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you jax, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from pbroussard209
Ah, the country, I long to be there so badly. I enjoyed your poem, it brought back the memory's of childhood, the open fields, the orchards, and rice patties. Now I'm stuck in a city with honking horns, loud motorcycles, and sirens at all hours of the night.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Ah, the country, I long to be there so badly. I enjoyed your poem, it brought back the memory's of childhood, the open fields, the orchards, and rice patties. Now I'm stuck in a city with honking horns, loud motorcycles, and sirens at all hours of the night.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Simple, great colourful and hopeful. This is what I put this writing down like. Yhere is thesweet airand the dancing of the ripened rye and harvest is near.beautiful imagery.
Benny Beeharry
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Simple, great colourful and hopeful. This is what I put this writing down like. Yhere is thesweet airand the dancing of the ripened rye and harvest is near.beautiful imagery.
Benny Beeharry
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Benny, I appreciate your review. :)