Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a tetractys with a good and helpful message about love. The form is done correctly according to the criteria of the contest, and syllable counts are correct. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015

thank you Jeanie, for reading and reviewing this my first attempt at this style. I was not sure if I had I in the correct format and syllable count ( I did check but sometimes you get conflicting information , so appreciate your encouraging comments. Having fun with different poems here on FanStory. Cheers Christine😊

Comment from Serendipity!

Excellent

I have never tried writing a tetractys poem, not having even heard of it before, but you seem to have a good handle on it. You expressed your thoughts smoothly, accurately and even profoundly. Good work.

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015

thank you Serendipity. Thanks for reading and giving me feedback. This is my first attempt too, so I was a little unsure how it would read, but I had a go with a few themes and this seemed to be the one I thought was best. I do believe in it's message. So thanks for you review and rating . Cheers Christine😀

reply by Anonymous Member on 16-Jun-2015

You're welcome. Good luck!

reply by Serendipity! on 16-Jun-2015

You're welcome. Good luck!