Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Coral, this is just ooutstanding stuff mate. You are on fire at the moment, writing some brilliant poetry. I think we may have found your biggest talent in the writing field well done my friend...

One little suggestion...

"Then began(begin) again"

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

This great praise coming from you.
Have you noticed that with all the rhyming you do, that it is hard to stop rhyming?

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

I have a lot of bad dreams, too! So I can relate to your poem, and it is very cleverly written! You could feel the nightmare quality to it. Nice job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks loads!

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

Okay. Yes. This was creepy. it reminded me of the movie I just saw, a remake of "Poltergeist." Good luck getting a good night's sleep! Nice job on the imagery.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you, I wish it was more fantasy than reality.

reply by emkoutny on 31-May-2015

Oh good!

Comment from TheRoguePoet

Excellent

Incredible poem that sounds to me like what depression is all about. I like your rhyme scheme and how it corresponds with the stanzas. Excellent last line, it really speaks to the depressed soul in me, telling me that you can always start over. Your title is very intriguing, it has a certain aura of mystery that lures a reader in. I pray you will overcome whatever troubles caused you to write this, and that your sleep will "resettle". Now go, and keep writing like the champion you are.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you so much.

I have dreamed all of my life, most are not quite so haunting.
As you say even depression can be useful.

Comment from Sabrina H.

Excellent

I loved it! You had good word use to make it creepy for the topic without making it gross if that makes sense. My favorite part was the "Who are you to whine and cry" in a way it reminded me of work. Five stars for the awesome writerð???

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 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Nice poem! I like it a lot. You are a good poet at heart. The lines rhyme, The format is attractive, good size font with a pretty light blue background.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank's