Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful haiku. Good luck in the contest!
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Nice presentation, beautiful picture, color background and font
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
Beautiful haiku. Good luck in the contest!
Format is in compliance with contest rules.
Haiku title by format
Nice presentation, beautiful picture, color background and font
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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You are so kind. Thanks bunches.
Comment from cbat
I have always felt sad to see dandelions mowed down.
When they turn white, a little hair spray preserves them for bouquets.
Loved your work!
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
I have always felt sad to see dandelions mowed down.
When they turn white, a little hair spray preserves them for bouquets.
Loved your work!
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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That is so true. Who hasn't played with them? Thank you so much.
Comment from JourneyHolm
I feel bad for the poor little dandelions. They just want to shine like all the rest. Regardless, this was a pretty good poem. I think that it met the prompt requirements well. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 31-May-2015
I feel bad for the poor little dandelions. They just want to shine like all the rest. Regardless, this was a pretty good poem. I think that it met the prompt requirements well. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for the review. I appreciate it.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well, nothing but the truth in this poem.
A nice slice of purely observational poetry in this haiku.
Good luck in the competition.
GMG
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reply by the author on 31-May-2015
Hi there,
Well, nothing but the truth in this poem.
A nice slice of purely observational poetry in this haiku.
Good luck in the competition.
GMG
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Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you so much.