Stealing Kisses
being naughty21 total reviews
Comment from inside echo
Definitely brings a smile. I love the rhyme, it is great. I love also how shocked the write seems to feel that he did this and got away with it. I also liked that you played with words, using Knot, " some things cannot untie" Well done. At times it almost read that things got further than a kiss. It also made me feel that the writer got more and more comfortable with the idea of stealing kisses, as at the end the writer seems to want to go and steal many more kisses. Once an act is done, it is easier to do it again... Be careful... It was a great read though. Thank you.
echo
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Definitely brings a smile. I love the rhyme, it is great. I love also how shocked the write seems to feel that he did this and got away with it. I also liked that you played with words, using Knot, " some things cannot untie" Well done. At times it almost read that things got further than a kiss. It also made me feel that the writer got more and more comfortable with the idea of stealing kisses, as at the end the writer seems to want to go and steal many more kisses. Once an act is done, it is easier to do it again... Be careful... It was a great read though. Thank you.
echo
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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thanks for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from lakeport
Steeling Kisses, indeed you better don't tell your wife, That's a very heartfelt expressed poem, very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Steeling Kisses, indeed you better don't tell your wife, That's a very heartfelt expressed poem, very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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thank you very much.
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you are very welcome,lakeport,
Comment from Pantygynt
Well she was'nt mine. I know that. How? 'cos I gave her up long ago. Why? Because:
"I have stolen kisses
from another mans wife
I have stolen kisses
had the time of my life"
We can all have some fun with this one, even if its only playing away with words.
Great fun.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Well she was'nt mine. I know that. How? 'cos I gave her up long ago. Why? Because:
"I have stolen kisses
from another mans wife
I have stolen kisses
had the time of my life"
We can all have some fun with this one, even if its only playing away with words.
Great fun.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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thanks for the kind review
Comment from benoenose
Though humorous fill the poem that itself is the meaning of an evil world . With lots of evil designs does humor exist. The poet enjoys the play full art of kisses and builds a romantic feeling within the poem. Thus the poem is read by all those love humor poems.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Though humorous fill the poem that itself is the meaning of an evil world . With lots of evil designs does humor exist. The poet enjoys the play full art of kisses and builds a romantic feeling within the poem. Thus the poem is read by all those love humor poems.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Yes its a good thing god loved us anyway.
Comment from mommerry
Naughty, naughty! But your poem was a fun read. I did wonder about a couple of things - in poetry sometimes what I think is not correct - is acceptable. If so ignore this but I thought: if kisses where but wishes(if kisses WERE but...) two places;
Did you want to use KNOT instead of NOT? also in two places - Oh - I nearly forgot - in your title shouldn't the word be spelled "Stealing"?
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Naughty, naughty! But your poem was a fun read. I did wonder about a couple of things - in poetry sometimes what I think is not correct - is acceptable. If so ignore this but I thought: if kisses where but wishes(if kisses WERE but...) two places;
Did you want to use KNOT instead of NOT? also in two places - Oh - I nearly forgot - in your title shouldn't the word be spelled "Stealing"?
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks for the kind review and the corrections
Comment from jlsavell
Oh keimosobie, how I relieved I am to hear this is for fun. I kept thinking as Ivwas reading, this poet is sure brave.. what if his wife or her husband read this!
Loved the rhythm of the work which enhanced the humorous tone of this work.
Jlsavell
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Oh keimosobie, how I relieved I am to hear this is for fun. I kept thinking as Ivwas reading, this poet is sure brave.. what if his wife or her husband read this!
Loved the rhythm of the work which enhanced the humorous tone of this work.
Jlsavell
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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thank you. and it really is just for fun. and she never reads my writting anyway
thank you im glad you enjoyed this thats the goal
Comment from justafan
This brought a smile to my face, kind sir. A stolen kiss sometimes the best kind. I love the way you took me on a journey that started with a kiss and left off with the lil minx off to get more :)
Always justafan,
Missy
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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This brought a smile to my face, kind sir. A stolen kiss sometimes the best kind. I love the way you took me on a journey that started with a kiss and left off with the lil minx off to get more :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Your reply
Comment from bayforesthimankush
This poem tells one real life incident that happens often; but it brings a sense of shame and guilty. In society one though married gets romantically attracted to another married woman. In reality this is a natural phenomenon; natural frequencies of two one man and one man are same resonance like loving each other occurs. Now the question how to tackle the situation? All around and society don't accept this; but like tuning fork one resonances with other. Let the married life continues and feeling also continues.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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This poem tells one real life incident that happens often; but it brings a sense of shame and guilty. In society one though married gets romantically attracted to another married woman. In reality this is a natural phenomenon; natural frequencies of two one man and one man are same resonance like loving each other occurs. Now the question how to tackle the situation? All around and society don't accept this; but like tuning fork one resonances with other. Let the married life continues and feeling also continues.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you, yes a problem indeed, but I just wanted to let people realize that it is common and that god still loves us
Comment from chasennov
being naughty. Steeling Kisses.' Yes, this is a good 'naughty' poem you have created here. I enjoyed the poem as per the message you've sent and the storyline is also good. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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being naughty. Steeling Kisses.' Yes, this is a good 'naughty' poem you have created here. I enjoyed the poem as per the message you've sent and the storyline is also good. Well done.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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I'm glad you liked it I am to entertain
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You are welcome.
Comment from Glasstruth
Very rhythmic and flows beautifully. The repetition works well, as if you're astonished by it all, and you just keep repeating how you can't believe it. Nice rhyming throughout. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Very rhythmic and flows beautifully. The repetition works well, as if you're astonished by it all, and you just keep repeating how you can't believe it. Nice rhyming throughout. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you thats what I was going for,
