Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

A lovely triolet for our ailing Brooke. If this outpouring of love doesn't heal her I will be surprised. Lovely poem with great enjambment. Job well done. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much, Nancy. glad you liked it. Nancy

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful photo to go with a lovely poem.
-I am sure Brooke will be glad to receive this and be cheered by it.
-The lines you chose to repeat are so true.
- It is so nice to see the outpouring of care and concern by so many on Fan Story.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Nancy

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-May-2015

You are very welcome. I know your poem will be appreciated by Brooke.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Very rhythmical and has a great flow. The repetition sounds very natural, unforced. A sweet songbird calling Brooke back might be a good way of doing it. Well crafted. Les

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for this great review. Glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The more I see of the triolet form used to enhance the content, the more I am impressed by the standard of poetic writing on this site. In this one the repeated lines do not seem to jar at all but fall quite naturally into place. This is without doubt the mark of a talented trioleteuse, if I may be allowed to coin the phrase. Somehow it has more class than trioletiste!

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for your gracious review. I'm pleased you enjoyed "Songbird." Nancy

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Lovely triolet for Brooke and author notes giving a very genuine and sweet message along with a gorgeous picture. I'm sure she will appreciate these very much. Your verse is perfectly constructed following the rules for this poetry form. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much Dorothy for your lovely review. Glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Very beautiful art work that you chose for this writing; love the poem. It is a fitting tribute to a great lady and awesome poet. Brooke's poem are a delight to read.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thank you, Amahra for your kind remarks. Glad you enjoyed "Songbird" Nancy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Beautiful tribute to your friend Brooke, I don't know her but I can see she touched a lot of lives and has many friends in FS, I hope she will feel better soon.

The poem is beautiful, follows the trilolet format, beautiful picture and clear font.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for reading and for your thoughtful review. Nancy

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Jannypan...

- The book has really taken off nicely. So god to see.
- Nice dedication.
- I haven't heard anymore updates since Brooke was admitted to hospital.
- Have you heard anything?

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Hi Jax, this is nancyjam. Thanks so much for reading. I haven't heard anything further on Brooke's condition since she was diagnosed with MS. More tests were being done. Nancy

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 30-May-2015

Soooo sorry, Nancy. Jeesh... I knew I was half asleep reviewing, but messing up one's name is rude. I do apologize.

I know someone else suffering from MS. Such a debilitating illness. I appreciate your update.

Again, so sorry. Have a great day. (*<*)

reply by the author on 30-May-2015

No problem :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful triolet for Brooke. It is well thought out and wonderfully presented. Brooke, you are in my prayers as well. Get well dear one we miss you, Patricia

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for your positive review and kind thoughts. Nancy

Comment from inside echo

Excellent

A very pretty and sweet poem dedicated to your friend. It is well written and comes from the heart. I hope your friend feels better soon. Thank you for sharing.
echo

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 30-May-2015

Thanks so much for your kind thoughts and lovely review. Nancy

reply by inside echo on 30-May-2015

You're welcome.