Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from judiverse
This is a lovely thought. We need to believe in the beautiful, the magical, and Brooke's poetry expressed just that. I loved the line "Cinderella's sudden slipper inheritance." Cinderella can marry a prince; dandelions can be beautiful. A wonderful tribute to Brooke. Let's hope and pray she gets well. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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This is a lovely thought. We need to believe in the beautiful, the magical, and Brooke's poetry expressed just that. I loved the line "Cinderella's sudden slipper inheritance." Cinderella can marry a prince; dandelions can be beautiful. A wonderful tribute to Brooke. Let's hope and pray she gets well. judi
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Hi Judi...-smile- sorry I'm late....ha I added that verse after I'd already posted....thought it needed more. yes indeed I sure hope everyone's praying for her. thank you. love Bug-
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You're welcome. Don't worry about late. I'm behind on reviewing myself. Hope Brooke gets well quickly. judi
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! And Great Music! The author's words are
creative, descriptive and descriptive. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. The healing energy and love being sent to Brooke is beautiful!
Thank you.....
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Excellent Poem! And Great Music! The author's words are
creative, descriptive and descriptive. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem. The healing energy and love being sent to Brooke is beautiful!
Thank you.....
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Hi ....-smile- well thank you. sorry I'm running late.....love Bug-
Comment from jlsavell
Good evening Michael,
A long journey home and I had many poems dedicated to Brooke to ruminate over and decide who gets my one six left of the week. This one is most deserved, and it isn't because of our deep and beautiful friendship, it is because it truly deserves.
You are the poet which engages the whole of man. I have said this many times over in regards to poetry. Good poetry must on all levels touch the reader's intellect and emotion. You bring to the forefront the complexities of human nature and of the tragedies and of the sufferings, the excitements and the joys.
Your poem has such depth and intensity to its economical language and its perfect arrangement of words to bind metaphors, beliefs, and facts into an incredible package of a sentimental journey, filled with respect and admiration for its subject.
Your work demonstrates that you have a certain command of life. When you scribe, you enrich our lives with enormous rewards of intellectual persuasion and beauty.
There are too many potent lines to go through each one, but the one which stands out for me is
unless flowers do manage life from weeds
True a beautiful life, though tended with diligent care from love has no guarantee against the weeds which may crop up. Then of course this particular line can be directed at the stout dandelion of which Brooke is so fond of.
Ahh, I shall bore you no more and let you get on with living.
My love to you always
Jimi
your poem reminded me of this song of which I would normally dedicate to you, but I now dedicate it to Brooke.
Love you dearly.. Jimi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Good evening Michael,
A long journey home and I had many poems dedicated to Brooke to ruminate over and decide who gets my one six left of the week. This one is most deserved, and it isn't because of our deep and beautiful friendship, it is because it truly deserves.
You are the poet which engages the whole of man. I have said this many times over in regards to poetry. Good poetry must on all levels touch the reader's intellect and emotion. You bring to the forefront the complexities of human nature and of the tragedies and of the sufferings, the excitements and the joys.
Your poem has such depth and intensity to its economical language and its perfect arrangement of words to bind metaphors, beliefs, and facts into an incredible package of a sentimental journey, filled with respect and admiration for its subject.
Your work demonstrates that you have a certain command of life. When you scribe, you enrich our lives with enormous rewards of intellectual persuasion and beauty.
There are too many potent lines to go through each one, but the one which stands out for me is
unless flowers do manage life from weeds
True a beautiful life, though tended with diligent care from love has no guarantee against the weeds which may crop up. Then of course this particular line can be directed at the stout dandelion of which Brooke is so fond of.
Ahh, I shall bore you no more and let you get on with living.
My love to you always
Jimi
your poem reminded me of this song of which I would normally dedicate to you, but I now dedicate it to Brooke.
Love you dearly.. Jimi
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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woooo weeeee who's that guy....I'll vote for him..."I wanna be like Mike".....ahhh haha. Alright...just messing....thank you always say the best stuff about me....love Michael
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Stop. You don't appreciate anything
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see....there you go again.....-smile-.....-headshake-...what a gal
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Love you like crazy.. so I am crazy!!!!
Inam extremely moody tonight. Sorry. Didn't mean it! Hey world, I didn't mean it.
Comment from inside echo
A beautifully written dedication to a friend you have created. "So damn beautiful" is in every word of your poem. So well written. Thank you for sharing.
echo
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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A beautifully written dedication to a friend you have created. "So damn beautiful" is in every word of your poem. So well written. Thank you for sharing.
echo
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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...-smile-....well....I'm sure I made her smile a couple times. ahhh thanks....so damn beautiful seemed fitting for poetry's reigning Queen. again thanks....love Bug-
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You are most welcome.
Comment from amada
My fave lines, dear friend, "in resurrected breath... /Christ blessed Jesus guest..." I hope Brooke recovers soon. As always you show such a tender loving heart. Best to you, dear friend.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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My fave lines, dear friend, "in resurrected breath... /Christ blessed Jesus guest..." I hope Brooke recovers soon. As always you show such a tender loving heart. Best to you, dear friend.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hey you...-smile- ...Hi. yes me too of course. Ahh she showed me hers first...-wink- thank you ....hope you're well my sweet friend.....love Michael
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: I like that you kept with the dandelion theme. Her famous dandelion poems make me laugh out loud and shake my head. Where I come from (Michigan), we spent a lot of money killing dandelions from our yards, but she seems to adore them. I hope that she has some in her room today. I actually understood your poem today . . . maybe I'm catching on to your way of thinking . . .Thunder
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Michael: I like that you kept with the dandelion theme. Her famous dandelion poems make me laugh out loud and shake my head. Where I come from (Michigan), we spent a lot of money killing dandelions from our yards, but she seems to adore them. I hope that she has some in her room today. I actually understood your poem today . . . maybe I'm catching on to your way of thinking . . .Thunder
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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yes....she ..um struck me as...ah not ordinary. fitting she would find the beauty in a weeds life. Well....I wrote this my way.....I may write another for her....more confined shall we say. haha...really I may. Anyway...my way of thinking usually clashes with established....so wear protective gear and heavy rings on your right hand....-wink- lol...ah just messing around Thunder....love Michael
Comment from TPAC
Very creative write, I find the work imaginative in line statements, poet continuous pound of perfect items selections placements, after items selections placements, poet weaving their conclusive end
"in resurrected breath...
Christ blessed Jesus guest
welcomed home supping happiness hereafter "
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Very creative write, I find the work imaginative in line statements, poet continuous pound of perfect items selections placements, after items selections placements, poet weaving their conclusive end
"in resurrected breath...
Christ blessed Jesus guest
welcomed home supping happiness hereafter "
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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hey Man....-smile- well thank you very much....it had to be....different ...special....I'm glad you enjoyed it....love bug-
Comment from robina1978
Indeed an excellent photo of Dandelions past flowering time. It complements your poem absolutely perfectly. Your free verse about Dandelions, Peter Pan and what more will certainly be liked by Brooke.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Indeed an excellent photo of Dandelions past flowering time. It complements your poem absolutely perfectly. Your free verse about Dandelions, Peter Pan and what more will certainly be liked by Brooke.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hello Sister....-smile- how's the weather over there....sky wont quit crying in Texas....I think so....-smile-....anyway I hope so. Pray God restore her health.....love Michael
Comment from WindPen
After your struggles and hesitations in life raise questions but collide into faith in the end you will be able to see yourself as beautiful as nature
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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After your struggles and hesitations in life raise questions but collide into faith in the end you will be able to see yourself as beautiful as nature
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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hmm -headtilt-....okay, why not let's give it a shot....thank you very much....-smile- love Bug-
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent tribute poem to brooke, Michael, she does love her dandelions so I know she will appreciate these words you penned for her. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent tribute poem to brooke, Michael, she does love her dandelions so I know she will appreciate these words you penned for her. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you Pam....please tell Tommy I said Hi....when you going to do another photo shoot...perhaps a calendar or something special....-smile- thank you....love Bug-