Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Mastery
Very good, debi. Brooke will love this:
"We call you poet, mentor, friend.
And now good vibes and prayers we send
to our dear Muse, for Muse you be,
sweet sister of Calliope."
Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Very good, debi. Brooke will love this:
"We call you poet, mentor, friend.
And now good vibes and prayers we send
to our dear Muse, for Muse you be,
sweet sister of Calliope."
Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the positive comments, Bob. I hope Brooke will recover enough to share her poetry again.
Comment from mermaids
The power to learn and then to grow is a marvelous line with strength and shows the impact Brooke has on students and poets. Your poetic form takes the reader to another place, Will float and fly upon the air, is another line that captures the spirit of Brooke.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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The power to learn and then to grow is a marvelous line with strength and shows the impact Brooke has on students and poets. Your poetic form takes the reader to another place, Will float and fly upon the air, is another line that captures the spirit of Brooke.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for pointing out those two lines, mermaids. I appreciate your encouraging review. Here is hoping we hear some good news soon.
Comment from Writingfundimension
'These dewdrops flow upon the page
in verses gracious, gentle, sage.
You guide us with a knowing hand
and give us tools to understand:'
Just beautiful, Debi. Your affection for Brooke comes through very clearly. Like you, I hope our words of support will help her find the inner strength to battle this catastrophe.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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'These dewdrops flow upon the page
in verses gracious, gentle, sage.
You guide us with a knowing hand
and give us tools to understand:'
Just beautiful, Debi. Your affection for Brooke comes through very clearly. Like you, I hope our words of support will help her find the inner strength to battle this catastrophe.
:) Bev
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Hi, Bev.
I appreciate the excellent rating and review. I echo your hope that all our good thoughts and support will help.
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You're very welcome, Debi. :) Bev
Comment from Pantygynt
A most charming tribute to a lady who is currently receiving many. My favourite verse here is your third, and pivotal verse with fine imagery based on the dandelion seed and when they fly on the wind everyone receives their share. Well written.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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A most charming tribute to a lady who is currently receiving many. My favourite verse here is your third, and pivotal verse with fine imagery based on the dandelion seed and when they fly on the wind everyone receives their share. Well written.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for the comments about the imagery and mentioning the third stanza. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from angelface2
Oh my, w.j. debi, how lovely is your poem in tribute to our dear friend Brooke. She is such a wonderful poet and a very lovely person. My prayers go up for her! :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Oh my, w.j. debi, how lovely is your poem in tribute to our dear friend Brooke. She is such a wonderful poet and a very lovely person. My prayers go up for her! :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Hi Miss Sally,
Thank you for the encouraging comments. I hope Brooke graces us with her verse again soon. Debi
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a lovely poem for Brooke.
I know she loves fairies, so this
will be special to her.
great presentation also.
Margaret
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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What a lovely poem for Brooke.
I know she loves fairies, so this
will be special to her.
great presentation also.
Margaret
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanking for the kind words of encouragement. I hope Brooke can recover enough to enjoy writing again soon. I know we all miss her.
Thank you so much with your helpful instructions on how to add to a multi-author book. I appreciate you taking the time to help out. Debi
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes, She is all that. She has been an all-inspiring help to me the few years I have been on FS. Never judgemental always kind and pointing you in the right direction. Well done WJ. Nancy
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Yes, She is all that. She has been an all-inspiring help to me the few years I have been on FS. Never judgemental always kind and pointing you in the right direction. Well done WJ. Nancy
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you, Nancy. I agree with your comments. She is so helpful and so kind. I hope we hear some good news soon. Debi
Comment from Dean Kuch
Calliope, the perfect muse to describe our dear Brooke, Debi.
Your poem was meticulously well rhymed and metered, and the eloquent words, phrases and metaphorical references you allude to in it are all things FanStory's own "adewpearl" is so well known for. Her inspirational, daily poetic pick-me-ups and tutelage is sorely missed here, and I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say that I hope she makes a full and speedy recovery.
Beautifully done, Debi. I'm sure Brooke is going to love this one.
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Calliope, the perfect muse to describe our dear Brooke, Debi.
Your poem was meticulously well rhymed and metered, and the eloquent words, phrases and metaphorical references you allude to in it are all things FanStory's own "adewpearl" is so well known for. Her inspirational, daily poetic pick-me-ups and tutelage is sorely missed here, and I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say that I hope she makes a full and speedy recovery.
Beautifully done, Debi. I'm sure Brooke is going to love this one.
~Dean
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you the detailed comments about the writing and the theme, Dean. I appreciate your insights.
You do echo the sentiments we all feel out our missing muse. Brooke's influence is such a positive one and she is inspirational in so many ways. I hope she can write and share with us again.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Another lovely offering in Brooke's virtual garden. I am sure she will be amazed at how far and wide the dandelion seeds have spread. Love the Calliope reference.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Another lovely offering in Brooke's virtual garden. I am sure she will be amazed at how far and wide the dandelion seeds have spread. Love the Calliope reference.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate you mentioning both the dandelion seeds and Calliiope.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful tribute to brooke, w.j. debi, you did an excellent job describing brooke's gentle loving nature and the beautiful poem that she graces us with. I enjoyed reading it. may she soon be able to brandish her pen like a sword.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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this is a beautiful tribute to brooke, w.j. debi, you did an excellent job describing brooke's gentle loving nature and the beautiful poem that she graces us with. I enjoyed reading it. may she soon be able to brandish her pen like a sword.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank your for the kind words about the writing. I love your statement and echo it back to you:
May she soon be able to brandish her pen like a sword. She certainly has an powerful and effective one.