Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A truly lovely poetic verse as a touching tribute to our friend and inspiration, Adewpearl, sweet Brooke. Yes indeed, Dandelions are the perfect flower to bring to brighten her convalescence. Very nicely done!

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

thanks Tom:)

Comment from judester

Excellent

I am loving this tribute to Brooke with each writer bringing their unique style and personal stories of how this special woman has touched our lives. I am sure that she will be chuffed to read each stories, written just for her, cheers judester

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

thanks Judester:)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Teresa...

- This is such a neat poem, my friend.
- So you, and so in keeping with Brooke.
- Well done!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

thanks jax:)

Comment from cbat

Excellent

I found this very well done, and pleasant to read.

Such a great way of sending a get well message.

I am now going to seek out some of her work.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you so much!

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

What a touching and well written poem for Brooke. I know she'll love it. Yes, it's so sad that she has MS. I hope she'll get better as time goes on. Not being able to go home must make her sad too.

Kat

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

I'm sure it will be difficult for her and her family. With getting the proper care though hopefully she'll be able to manage it better and come back on FS. Thanks so much.

reply by MizKat on 28-May-2015

That would be nice if she could come back on FS. She's a wonderful person.

Comment from Kyam

Excellent

Very up beat and lovely. Sweet as honeydew in the summertime. I was very impressed. It really flowed. I think the writer is very talented and should definitely continue to write. Faith

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you Faith:)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Teresa - this is truly a lovely poem for Brooke - very moving and very thoughtful. She loves dandelions - and she will love this poem. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Descriptive writing for a beloved friend and poet! The bouquet from your lawn expresses the sentiment well! Definitely, a lady, gifted with verse to have such talented writers sending her well wishes. I know from your poem, she has a son, Sawyer, and her family is dear to her! I'm sure she will smile as she reads your lovely poem! Great job!

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 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Actually Sawyer is her little grandson - so dear to her. Thanks so much:)

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Such nice words set in a beautiful yellow format..You express your so well Teresa that rhyme or not your feeling flow in each and every line.. I know she is smiling as she reads this..
tk

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 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you TK:)