Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Spitfire
I always loved her counting poems and wanted to try this idea. Unfortunately, too many others had their spoon in the broth. Rocks is hard, but you did it well, particularly the last four stanzas. Love the pun in the last line. :-)
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reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I always loved her counting poems and wanted to try this idea. Unfortunately, too many others had their spoon in the broth. Rocks is hard, but you did it well, particularly the last four stanzas. Love the pun in the last line. :-)
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Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and great review. Do write a v]counting poem--I know you are a super writer.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice job Jannypan! I like your format and picture. To me, the message is that is hard to be a rock. :) You got that rhyming down. The poem sounds good. I can easily imagine the rocks, you did a good job with visualization.
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Nice job Jannypan! I like your format and picture. To me, the message is that is hard to be a rock. :) You got that rhyming down. The poem sounds good. I can easily imagine the rocks, you did a good job with visualization.
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Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I agree==being a rock would be hard. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem. Jan
Comment from JourneyHolm
I love this poem. Kudos for staying strong with the theme. You did an excellent job coming up with unique modes of travel and adventure for each stone. The twisted end works particularly well, as I had grow attached and wanted something of a happy ending. Thank you for sharing!
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I love this poem. Kudos for staying strong with the theme. You did an excellent job coming up with unique modes of travel and adventure for each stone. The twisted end works particularly well, as I had grow attached and wanted something of a happy ending. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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WOW! I am so pleased with your great rating of 6. I really appreciate your time reading/reviewing/commenting on my poem. Thank you so much.