Weave on
Sometimes it only takes a wisp.12 total reviews
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
How sweet this is Dallas..You managed to tell a story in 4 lines that might take others 4 pages.. You are a verbal painter that's for sure..
tk
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reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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How sweet this is Dallas..You managed to tell a story in 4 lines that might take others 4 pages.. You are a verbal painter that's for sure..
tk
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Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Hi, T.K. Thanks for the illustrious review.
Comment from inside echo
Very well done. I love the contrast between strength and fragile. Your comparisons between steel and wisps, and hope and despair are great. You tell a story in just 4 short lines. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
echo
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reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Very well done. I love the contrast between strength and fragile. Your comparisons between steel and wisps, and hope and despair are great. You tell a story in just 4 short lines. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
echo
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Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.