Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I agree with the message. Reviewers can help and many times, they have helped me. I have become a better writer since being on the site, but I have had a few reviews where I felt about as big as an ant in the cracks of life. Patricia

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you Patcelaw

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Umph! Well, haven't we all been there:
Impulsive Writing
Attracts Twit Vicious Morons
Reviews Kills Spirit
Well done! You have managed to convey much in so few words.
Nicole

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you Curly Girly :)

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Not on this site they are not and that goes doubly for those reviewed. I am going to give you a 5-Star review simply because I like your urging. (See my profile to find out why I am so bitter about this site's whole review process).

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you Brett, I appreciate your review. I will check your profile, now I am curious. :)

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Ain't it the truth? The artwork is perfectly suited to the short form. Looks like she is counting syllables on her fingers. I do that, too. Best wishes with your entry.

 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you Jean, I appreciate the review and your kind words

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I think constructive criticism is good but you are right that it can also kill the spirit. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa

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 Comment Written 14-May-2015

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reply by the author on 14-May-2015

Thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review and kind words.