Comment from inside echo

Excellent

I pray also for some peace for you. Very well written. The reader can feel your pain, and your struggle. Very sad to read. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
echo

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating review and most of for your prayers. Blessings my friend. Pharp

reply by inside echo on 08-May-2015

You are welcome, and I shall continue to pray for you and your friend.
echo

Comment from pattipac

Excellent

Your emotional cry for mercy to help you endure the pain and emotional distress of a terminal illness, reveals an under-girding of faith that the Lord is near.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your review, rating and comments. This cry for mercy is for a very dear and special friend. Blessings my friend Pharp

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A simple prayer for mercy. We certainly don't want justice (well I don't). Good picture and presentation to your spiritual poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind comments. Pharp

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

Simplistic but with great impact for this prompt. I like your placement of the repetitive line as well. Most effective.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating, review and kind comments. Pharp

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Deep gravy here Good eats for a poet to feast. I feel it more what you did not say, than thoughts spoken which limits brilliance. Still a creative subject for a poem, take your time make this one gleam Thanking you for sharing

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments, greatly appreciated. Pharp

Comment from BJ_Barnes

Excellent

Beautiful poem! You can really sense the emotion that was put into this and it flows together so well. It has it's own unique rhythm. Thank you so much for sharing.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for your rating, review and very kind comments.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

I can truly understand this. When life becomes a burden due to illness and even when sleep, the last comfort of living is disrupted then what's left? I hope I go quickly when it's my time. Very real. Thanks for sharing. Les

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 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks so much for rating and review, greatly appreciated.