Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

It doesn't sound very pretty (greasy grey mud flats, and I would imagine the marshland is smelly (brackish creeks). Brilliant word choices to create a mood of desolation:
sucked, from her hide and seek amongst the clouds,
down to the glutinous oblivion of the marsh
Every line is amazing. I prefer prose reading to poetry, but this shows craftsmanship in the genre. Six stars if I had any left.
Shari
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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015

You're right, pretty it isn't, awesome in it's own way and wild, impressive etc. A number of adjectives spring to mind but not pretty. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comment from fafa

Excellent

This type of poem where the feelings flow of so truthful form they give samples of the aptitude to write them and to give to understand its content, greetings and blessings

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015

Many thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I live near salt marshes. It is a world unto itself. The unique birds and the turtles and snakes are amazing to see. Your poem was a true poetic tribute to this unique landscape. Beautifully written. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015

Thank you for reading and reviewing and your kind comments.