Littoral
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Pebble on the Strand"Poems about the coastline
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was excellent. You can read this on many levels (not just about the pebbles) and I like that. Excellent use of rhyme. If I were to make a suggestion it would be to count syllables and work on making each line more uniform. A modern thing. This was terrific.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I thought this was excellent. You can read this on many levels (not just about the pebbles) and I like that. Excellent use of rhyme. If I were to make a suggestion it would be to count syllables and work on making each line more uniform. A modern thing. This was terrific.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am so pleased that you see this on a multi- level basis because that was intentional.