Tiny Terrors
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Abandoned"A collection of short horror fiction
53 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
The abandoned, indeed that's a spooky and mysterious place. I enjoyed reading the story, God bless you. lakeport.........
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
The abandoned, indeed that's a spooky and mysterious place. I enjoyed reading the story, God bless you. lakeport.........
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks, lakeport, and may God bless you too. :)
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you are very welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from rod007
A short story that does really scare. What did the bad scarecrows turn into? A story with questions always hold suspense. Well done, Dean.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
A short story that does really scare. What did the bad scarecrows turn into? A story with questions always hold suspense. Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Rod. much obliged. :) ~Deano
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I will never look at an old
barn the same again and there
are plenty around the farms here.
I like your little creepy stories, Dean.
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
I will never look at an old
barn the same again and there
are plenty around the farms here.
I like your little creepy stories, Dean.
Margaret
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a million, Margaret. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series. It is appreciated, very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from JM
This is a horrifically nice story. It has enough "scare" to keep us interested without having to turn on all the lights in the room. :)
Also, your title is so appropriate....reminds me of that other catchy title: The Returned.
I will be looking for your other TTT.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
This is a horrifically nice story. It has enough "scare" to keep us interested without having to turn on all the lights in the room. :)
Also, your title is so appropriate....reminds me of that other catchy title: The Returned.
I will be looking for your other TTT.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, JM. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series, and the generous six star rating as well. It is appreciated, very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from MoonMuse
Hi Dean, I love that scarecrow picture - super creepy! *lol* Nice twist with the scarecrows being locked in the barn. Your stories always bring a smile. I'm not sure what that says about me...
Cheers! MM
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
Hi Dean, I love that scarecrow picture - super creepy! *lol* Nice twist with the scarecrows being locked in the barn. Your stories always bring a smile. I'm not sure what that says about me...
Cheers! MM
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks, MoonMuse. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series. It is appreciated, very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am petrified of scarecrows. I watched an episode of supernatural where a scarecrow killed people who were left forvhim. Then he ensured prospetitybforvthevtown. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
I am petrified of scarecrows. I watched an episode of supernatural where a scarecrow killed people who were left forvhim. Then he ensured prospetitybforvthevtown. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Gretchen. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series. It is very much appreciated. ~Dean :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
It sounds like someone should approach that barn, with a can of kerosine and a match! Not at night, of course. Thanks for a fun little story, just scary enough.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
It sounds like someone should approach that barn, with a can of kerosine and a match! Not at night, of course. Thanks for a fun little story, just scary enough.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Cindy. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series. I sincerely appreciate it very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from emrpoems
you may be master of all trades but you are a master of this genre. Love this new addition to the Tiny Tales of Terror series
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
you may be master of all trades but you are a master of this genre. Love this new addition to the Tiny Tales of Terror series
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, EM. I really appreciate your interest in this series, and the most generous six star rating as well. I sincerely appreciate it very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from Janet Foor
I loved this gruesome and delightfully scary tale of terror with a moral for the thrill seekers. I definitely agree with the kids who never went there again.
Fun to read from the comfort of my little chair.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
I loved this gruesome and delightfully scary tale of terror with a moral for the thrill seekers. I definitely agree with the kids who never went there again.
Fun to read from the comfort of my little chair.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Janet. I really appreciate you taking an interest in this series, and the generous six star rating as well. It is appreciated, very much. ~Dean :)
Comment from kriver
Hi Dean
Very good write.
Good interaction of the characters.
Very good scene development and
description for such a short write.
Holy Smokes where did you get these pictures?
They really go with this story.
Is this picture of the sort of dead guy an indication of something you're trying to confess to us? LOL.
On the creepy and gruesome scale: I think tale gets 3 creepy's for the write and 2 gruesome's for the picture. LOL
However it sounds like you scare the pants off your women readers with your writes, and they seem to enjoy the process. Is this some kind of new secret technique I'm learning about for us single guys? LOL
Over all, I think it is a very good write.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
Hi Dean
Very good write.
Good interaction of the characters.
Very good scene development and
description for such a short write.
Holy Smokes where did you get these pictures?
They really go with this story.
Is this picture of the sort of dead guy an indication of something you're trying to confess to us? LOL.
On the creepy and gruesome scale: I think tale gets 3 creepy's for the write and 2 gruesome's for the picture. LOL
However it sounds like you scare the pants off your women readers with your writes, and they seem to enjoy the process. Is this some kind of new secret technique I'm learning about for us single guys? LOL
Over all, I think it is a very good write.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Hey, thanks a bunch for taking an interest in this series of flash horror tales, Kriver. I very much appreciate it, as well as the six star rating. While this will never be Book of the Month material here at good old FS, I do hope the stories are entertaining, at least.
I sincerely appreciate your review. ~Dean :)