Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "senryu (check male or female)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
LOL - Shari - almost spilled my coffee with this one! Ok your a cracker shot with the innuendos - well aimed and fired my friend.
Thanks for sharing, and the smiles.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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LOL - Shari - almost spilled my coffee with this one! Ok your a cracker shot with the innuendos - well aimed and fired my friend.
Thanks for sharing, and the smiles.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thanks, Maureen. Don't know where all this sarcasm comes from.
Comment from IndianaIrish
That sure is the truth, Shari! I love your word "genderation" and it's so you and so perfect. I often wonder why some forms need to know gender. I'm very tempted sometimes to not check the box for sex, but to write in...not enough. lol
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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That sure is the truth, Shari! I love your word "genderation" and it's so you and so perfect. I often wonder why some forms need to know gender. I'm very tempted sometimes to not check the box for sex, but to write in...not enough. lol
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Or you could write in "alien". LOL
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Shari
I've missed your writing and what do I come across when catching up? ROFL!!!
I love your senryu and the way your mind thinks. This is extremely clever and so humorous about the exasperation of the gender bender generation. I think the heart orientation is perhaps the most important .. your illustration is so apt ... I wish I could read the fine print. Your poem offers a great point to embellish your topic. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hi Shari
I've missed your writing and what do I come across when catching up? ROFL!!!
I love your senryu and the way your mind thinks. This is extremely clever and so humorous about the exasperation of the gender bender generation. I think the heart orientation is perhaps the most important .. your illustration is so apt ... I wish I could read the fine print. Your poem offers a great point to embellish your topic. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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I've missed your reviewing and kisses and hugs signature. It's too bad the words on the poster are so blurred. Thanks for stopping by.
Shari xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Hi Shari
So nice of you to say ... thank you. I've missed you too!! I hope to be stopping by more regularly now. Hugs and Hershey kisses - Lovi xoxo
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very good! And appropriate for the new normal of random sexes. How many choices should really be listed, I wonder? This is all so absurd.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Very good! And appropriate for the new normal of random sexes. How many choices should really be listed, I wonder? This is all so absurd.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Can you imagine the different sections in a clothing store?
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We decorated cookies right before Christmas and I won't lie we put balls on the one and I made a bikini for the other but it kinds looked like she had her period. LOL. What can I say, we had fun :) Great job and what a fun little poem to read
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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We decorated cookies right before Christmas and I won't lie we put balls on the one and I made a bikini for the other but it kinds looked like she had her period. LOL. What can I say, we had fun :) Great job and what a fun little poem to read
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Sounds like something I would do. Very creative. Wonder what kids would think. :-)
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting social comment. I guess 'genderation' also covers chairman /chairwoman/ chairperson, etc. I wonder what the other boxes might be? Both? Neither? Not sure? Neuter? The mind boggles!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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An interesting social comment. I guess 'genderation' also covers chairman /chairwoman/ chairperson, etc. I wonder what the other boxes might be? Both? Neither? Not sure? Neuter? The mind boggles!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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For sure, Tony. Down with labels. :-)
Comment from acerisestory
Ha ha! So very clever, Spitfire!
The artwork is a fun and perfect enhancement for your well chosen words -- especially "genderation." Did you coin this word? It's wonderful!
Well done! Thanks for making me laugh. Alana
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Ha ha! So very clever, Spitfire!
The artwork is a fun and perfect enhancement for your well chosen words -- especially "genderation." Did you coin this word? It's wonderful!
Well done! Thanks for making me laugh. Alana
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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As far as I know, the word is original, made especially for the poem. Thanks, Alana.
Comment from walbc
Very very clever, Shari. I love it. Imagination plus. Where on earth did you find that fantastic drawing to go with your poem?? I bet you did it yourself! you're such a lively and enthusiastic person. Warmest, Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Very very clever, Shari. I love it. Imagination plus. Where on earth did you find that fantastic drawing to go with your poem?? I bet you did it yourself! you're such a lively and enthusiastic person. Warmest, Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Regarding the picture, I went on google images and wrote in sex confusion. This was one of the choices. How lucky can a gal(I think LOL) get. Thank you so much for the exceptional rating.
Trust me, I have my down days too. I'm been on 40mg Celexa for the past nine years. Living 24/7 with your mate when you're retired takes patience no matter how much you love him.
Comment from Zinnia48
The six is for exceptional creative thinking--and a valid social observation! As usual you provoke much thinking with just a few well chosen words. Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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The six is for exceptional creative thinking--and a valid social observation! As usual you provoke much thinking with just a few well chosen words. Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Caroline, you made my day. Thanks for the sixer.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh, yeah, Shari, you're absolutely right. The Gingerbread Man is a thing of the past. Now, you've coined a new phrase for modern-day times, "The Genderbread Person". Fitting, giving the state of relationships these days, one would think, LOL.
Good word play, and a fun poem to read and contemplate.
Good stuff, yum-yum... :)
~Dean
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Heh-heh, yeah, Shari, you're absolutely right. The Gingerbread Man is a thing of the past. Now, you've coined a new phrase for modern-day times, "The Genderbread Person". Fitting, giving the state of relationships these days, one would think, LOL.
Good word play, and a fun poem to read and contemplate.
Good stuff, yum-yum... :)
~Dean
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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I don't know if you read someone's post on the transgender boy named Ryland, but it got me to thinking... dangerous, huh. ;-)
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No, I haven't read that one, Shari. But, such is the world in which we live today, like it or not... ~Dean