Beautiful Death
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Comment from Curly Girly
Honestly, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Sadly, there is some truth in these nasty words. But fortunately, not everyone ages quite so badly! Some do stay with it until the last.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Honestly, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Sadly, there is some truth in these nasty words. But fortunately, not everyone ages quite so badly! Some do stay with it until the last.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your reply!
You are right, my many sisters all seem to have done a better job of ageing than I.
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! I hear ya mate. This is a great piece, it's as rough as a pair of barbed wire underpants but who cares I loved it. Getting old sometimes just sucks! I have a 6yo daughter and I struggle to keep up with the little bugger. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Hahahahaha! I hear ya mate. This is a great piece, it's as rough as a pair of barbed wire underpants but who cares I loved it. Getting old sometimes just sucks! I have a 6yo daughter and I struggle to keep up with the little bugger. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Congratulations on your little daughter.
This is the age of my grain daughter, you do not want to loose a moment with them.
I am embarrassed at the words I allowed myself to use.
I love the barbed wire thing though.
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G'day mate. I want to ask you to do me a favor please. We all get bad reviews and I have looked through your portfolia and seen you have had a few. Just don't let them get into your heart.
I learned this writing stuff the hard way and I stuck at it and it paid off. Some reviewers have no manners and no common sense and just have to try and throw their very limited weight around. Just take the good stuff on board and ignore the rude pricks and you will be fine.
Please let me know if you want me to clarify any of this. But most of all just keep writing and enjoying. Cheers Fez
Comment from Jay Squires
OMG, this is good! I sincerely hope it is not accurate since I am experiencing many of those symptoms.
My only difference would be the last two lines:
Please give my account credit for one more year! I'll improve. Give me a chance.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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OMG, this is good! I sincerely hope it is not accurate since I am experiencing many of those symptoms.
My only difference would be the last two lines:
Please give my account credit for one more year! I'll improve. Give me a chance.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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LOL
Thank you!