I look in the mirror .
A free style poem22 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Ine;
+ Imagery very clear and distinct and quite exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive Throughout the writing.
+ Syntax used, for instance the period, Was used in certain areas were in needn't breakup the sentence's flow Of thought.
+ Enjambment used Where it is the running on of a thought from one verse, stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Poetic assessment and summary: being that this writing was And and emblematic an annotated commentary way and also was written as a personal
analysis of the writer's physical attributes was very interesting and straightforward.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Ine;
+ Imagery very clear and distinct and quite exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive Throughout the writing.
+ Syntax used, for instance the period, Was used in certain areas were in needn't breakup the sentence's flow Of thought.
+ Enjambment used Where it is the running on of a thought from one verse, stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Poetic assessment and summary: being that this writing was And and emblematic an annotated commentary way and also was written as a personal
analysis of the writer's physical attributes was very interesting and straightforward.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, I got glasses too!!! but they are toooooo strong for me...and guess what...we all have those wrinkles...love your poem...and the picture and colors ...beautiful....Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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HI Ine, I got glasses too!!! but they are toooooo strong for me...and guess what...we all have those wrinkles...love your poem...and the picture and colors ...beautiful....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
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you are so welcome Ine...God Bless sweet girl...xxoo luff
Comment from Healing
Great poetry. I like the flow and this poem was nice to read. I love the last few lines of this as I have the same problem LOL. But new glasses won't help. :)
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Great poetry. I like the flow and this poem was nice to read. I love the last few lines of this as I have the same problem LOL. But new glasses won't help. :)
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from Dutchie
You made me giggle about this one, Ine
You are always so honest in a funny way. Yes, now you have new spectacles you see things you don't want to see..LOL.
I have small feet too and I'm not happy with it. Size 34. But wrinkles appear.
On the other hand it's good you lost weight. Time for shopping and buy new clothes
Loved it!! Fia
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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You made me giggle about this one, Ine
You are always so honest in a funny way. Yes, now you have new spectacles you see things you don't want to see..LOL.
I have small feet too and I'm not happy with it. Size 34. But wrinkles appear.
On the other hand it's good you lost weight. Time for shopping and buy new clothes
Loved it!! Fia
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week. I have bought new cloths. Thanks for the gorgeous six.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Well penned poem paired nicely with artwork and color scheme. Nice wording which makes the presentation, rhythm and flow light and airy for a good read. Thanks for sharing and God Bless, Deb
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Well penned poem paired nicely with artwork and color scheme. Nice wording which makes the presentation, rhythm and flow light and airy for a good read. Thanks for sharing and God Bless, Deb
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Nice and honest comment about what you see when you look into the mirror. It's fun to get new glasses, though, but they often make other things appear that you would just as soon not be so aware of.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Nice and honest comment about what you see when you look into the mirror. It's fun to get new glasses, though, but they often make other things appear that you would just as soon not be so aware of.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week.
Comment from RGstar
weight is never a problem if losing properly. Keep the health, it is the most important aspect of our survival...without it , all the money in the world will not help.
Feel well, and all will fall into place.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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weight is never a problem if losing properly. Keep the health, it is the most important aspect of our survival...without it , all the money in the world will not help.
Feel well, and all will fall into place.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your lovely review, Ine. Have a great and lovely week. You are so right.
Comment from misscookie
I You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
When I look in the mirror everything about me has change.
People tell me I still look good for my age.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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I You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
When I look in the mirror everything about me has change.
People tell me I still look good for my age.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and great week.
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You're very welcome.
Have a blessed evening.
Cookie
Comment from judiverse
This is interesting as you make an honest appraisal. You see the good as well as the flaws. Losing weight is good, so I'd accept the wrinkles that go along with it. You notice small ears and feet. I'm afraid I have big feet, but have to live with them. New glasses can give you a new outlook. Hope they're working well for you. judi
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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This is interesting as you make an honest appraisal. You see the good as well as the flaws. Losing weight is good, so I'd accept the wrinkles that go along with it. You notice small ears and feet. I'm afraid I have big feet, but have to live with them. New glasses can give you a new outlook. Hope they're working well for you. judi
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and great week.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
This is nice poem. You did a great job in writing it. I can relate to what your saying. My arms have skin that is hanging down because I lost some weight. I'm also getting wrinkled. So much fun to look at. LOL
Kat
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Hi Ine,
This is nice poem. You did a great job in writing it. I can relate to what your saying. My arms have skin that is hanging down because I lost some weight. I'm also getting wrinkled. So much fun to look at. LOL
Kat
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and great week.