Love You
Love in so few words, yet so many emotions.21 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a sweet piece of poetic art dear friend! i love you are the three magical words that prevail with the words i am sorry. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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this is a sweet piece of poetic art dear friend! i love you are the three magical words that prevail with the words i am sorry. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your very kind words and generous rating.
Comment from Zinnia48
Powerful poem penned in just a few well chosen words. It does reflect a universal truth, both in how the words impact us if said or withheld. The picture is beautiful but overwhelm the poem. I think a poem of this quality should be the focus, and only accentuated by the (gorgeous) artwork. Caroline
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Powerful poem penned in just a few well chosen words. It does reflect a universal truth, both in how the words impact us if said or withheld. The picture is beautiful but overwhelm the poem. I think a poem of this quality should be the focus, and only accentuated by the (gorgeous) artwork. Caroline
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and for your kind remarks. Thank you, also for the generous rating.
Your criticism is greatly appreciated.
Comment from artemis53
What a quite well done piece about something seemingly so small and yet can either make or break us. Amazing how we are satisfied if only given crumbs by some people.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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What a quite well done piece about something seemingly so small and yet can either make or break us. Amazing how we are satisfied if only given crumbs by some people.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your review of my work, and your kind words and generous rating.
Comment from Pam (respa)
The word choice really gets the topic across, not just love but the strength behind the meaning, as you say in line two. The image in line three switches the emotion nicely with Float softly, a very different feeling, but still true but adding a softer tone. Then line four takes the emotion on another level with Or slay....This is definitely a strong image reinforced with alliteration of slay and soul. The one word ending shows how much the love really means. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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The word choice really gets the topic across, not just love but the strength behind the meaning, as you say in line two. The image in line three switches the emotion nicely with Float softly, a very different feeling, but still true but adding a softer tone. Then line four takes the emotion on another level with Or slay....This is definitely a strong image reinforced with alliteration of slay and soul. The one word ending shows how much the love really means. Nicely written.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your excellent review and generous rating.
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You are welcome.
Comment from ravenblack
Although this seems to want to be a longer poem, in such a short piece you show love as having both the power to float comfort and slay with steely precision. Love does make the world go round and the lack of it causes it it flare up. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Although this seems to want to be a longer poem, in such a short piece you show love as having both the power to float comfort and slay with steely precision. Love does make the world go round and the lack of it causes it it flare up. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, and thanks for your generous rating.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
The picture is too dominating and over powering for such a short poem. Visually it is about all the reader sees unless they look harder a second time. A smaller version of the same picture would have been more appropriate. I did however enjoy the actual poem and what it was saying. Write on.
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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The picture is too dominating and over powering for such a short poem. Visually it is about all the reader sees unless they look harder a second time. A smaller version of the same picture would have been more appropriate. I did however enjoy the actual poem and what it was saying. Write on.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Your criticism is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Glasstruth
Funny picture. Those are powerful words. Sometimes it's used deceitfully. Either way, it's something we crave for. Creative. Well done. Les
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Funny picture. Those are powerful words. Sometimes it's used deceitfully. Either way, it's something we crave for. Creative. Well done. Les
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your kind review and rating.
Comment from Dawny53
Very nice! I like and admire the fact that love is just as easily withheld as it is given.. and in so few words you have managed to say a lot!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Very nice! I like and admire the fact that love is just as easily withheld as it is given.. and in so few words you have managed to say a lot!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your review and generous rating.
That's me, a woman of few words...NOT.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is short. I usually don't write reviews for this kind of poem, however, this one is exceptional.
Your words are straight to the point. They give the good with the bad and your point is understood right away. I really enjoyed these well thought out words. Great job, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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This is short. I usually don't write reviews for this kind of poem, however, this one is exceptional.
Your words are straight to the point. They give the good with the bad and your point is understood right away. I really enjoyed these well thought out words. Great job, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous rating.
Just between us...I usually don't rate very short poems either. They just seem too forced.
Comment from Helena Frances
Great artwork-I could get lost in that:)
Powerful, deep, and truthful description of the power of love.
It can inflate or deflate us at its whim.
Great writing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Great artwork-I could get lost in that:)
Powerful, deep, and truthful description of the power of love.
It can inflate or deflate us at its whim.
Great writing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. Thank you also, for the generous rating.