Shades Of Winter
free verse15 total reviews
Comment from Tonulak
I enjoyed this from its perspective of winter in the desert. I also liked the transition through the word "brown" into the personal perspective ofwaking and pondering. Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I enjoyed this from its perspective of winter in the desert. I also liked the transition through the word "brown" into the personal perspective ofwaking and pondering. Great job--Ted
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Hi Ted! Great hearing from you!
Comment from Dean Kuch
A wonderfully composed, melancholy free verse, Jewell. Yes, all too often (and especially in the matters of love and relationships) we hear but do not listen, we see, but do not really see. And, like the big hair band Cinderella's song so succinctly states, "You don't what you've got until it's gone..."
Well done. ~Dean :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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A wonderfully composed, melancholy free verse, Jewell. Yes, all too often (and especially in the matters of love and relationships) we hear but do not listen, we see, but do not really see. And, like the big hair band Cinderella's song so succinctly states, "You don't what you've got until it's gone..."
Well done. ~Dean :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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You got it, Dean! Great to hear from you! Tgank you!
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thanks! I needed this. Blessed is the soul that can sink into creation -- even if it does take a cup of hot coffee to prime. So often I say that the Creator communes with His children through His creation. Thank you for being a faithful scribe.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thanks! I needed this. Blessed is the soul that can sink into creation -- even if it does take a cup of hot coffee to prime. So often I say that the Creator communes with His children through His creation. Thank you for being a faithful scribe.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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My Jean! I've missed you! Thank you for the delightful review and six stars!
Comment from giraffmang
Hello there,
This was a good read.
Very fast paced and the word choices were good. the imagery was vivid and appealing.
Nicely penned.
GMG
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Hello there,
This was a good read.
Very fast paced and the word choices were good. the imagery was vivid and appealing.
Nicely penned.
GMG
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from scd41
For those where winter is severe, it is dreaded but in places where it is merely a hope, imagination can be enjoyable. I liked the lines:
'Willow branch
taps out a melodic tune
the vine stretches
forth a yawn'
Your poetic deftness has come to light in above lines besides others.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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For those where winter is severe, it is dreaded but in places where it is merely a hope, imagination can be enjoyable. I liked the lines:
'Willow branch
taps out a melodic tune
the vine stretches
forth a yawn'
Your poetic deftness has come to light in above lines besides others.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you!
