Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I have heard many mothers say that there are no courses or instructions for motherhood. Your words capture what many are thinking. There are times when you think you are getting it wrong but many times you get it right and plod on. Well done here.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thank you, mermaids, for your great feedback, kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from trimple

Excellent

LOL Debra :)

Indeed motherhood arrives without instruction...

Just as well our instinct to care for our offspring is biological.

Few mothers are perfect my friend :)


Super twist at the end

Thoughtful poem, Deb

Warm regards

tracey

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thanks, Tracey :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Love, Debs x

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Imperfection takes lots of practice, Debs. ;-)

Very self-effacing and humorous write.

I'm sure you're the 'best mother in the world' - just ask hubby and the kids...when they're well fed and chilled out. LOL

Fun read.

Cheers, Ray xx



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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thanks Ray, for your great feedback and for making me smile :) Debs x