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2015

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Comment from Domino 2
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HAHA!

Very true to life crazy habit, described with wit, Debs.

I do too, in the hope it will get rid of the thing, but of course it just takes longer to heal as a result.

Ooooh...I just 'spotted' another one. "Take that! Huh, that'll teach you!" ;-)

Cheers, Ray xx


 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
    Hi Ray :) Do we ALL do it then?! Don't make it sore!
    I meant the poem in both the literal and metaphoric way - I just can't let old wounds heal if you know what I mean - I'm my own worst enemy at times... Glad to see you changed your minds about prompt sponsorship - I might have a crack at your latest ;)
    Bye for now, Debs x
reply by Domino 2 on 24-Feb-2015
    I was too busy smiling and empathising, to appreciate the very clever metaphor, Debs.

    I think many women dwell on things longer than men. Thankfully, I have a short memory, so that helps too. :-)

    Thanks for your kind contest comments, and I hope you enter.

    Ray xx
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Hahahahaha---How did you know I do that ALL the time. I can never leave anything alone while it heals, be it a scab, an argument, or even an entire relationship. The artwork you chose is fabulous.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
    Same here, gypsycaravan! I'm my own worst enemy - I do myself no favours! Thanks for your empathetic feedback :) love, Debra
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Debra. I am rapidly becoming a fan of these little pieces of poetry when one jumps off the page at me that says as much as this one does. Well done, cheers Fez

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Fez :) Glad you enjoyed it! Regards, Debra
Comment from humpwhistle
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I think that a pretty common habit--whether you're talking
literally or metaphorically. It's not easy to get
your mind--or fingers--to leave something that bothers you.
I think it's a trait we all live with.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
    Hi Lee :)
    Thanks for your great feedback...
    Kindest regards, Debra