Love in the Air
Nature writes a story17 total reviews
Comment from skye
an embrace
inviting sunrise
love story
I wonder if trees actually have emotions? I know they bleed when cut, shrivel when neglected.
Excellent.
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an embrace
inviting sunrise
love story
I wonder if trees actually have emotions? I know they bleed when cut, shrivel when neglected.
Excellent.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a huggable poem....
Inviting sunrise
Love story...
Beautiful beautiful....it reminds me of maori legend that sky father loved earth mother
God bless
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This is a huggable poem....
Inviting sunrise
Love story...
Beautiful beautiful....it reminds me of maori legend that sky father loved earth mother
God bless
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Dawny53
I'm glad you mention about the branches in your authors notes.. because at first glance I didn't see that! This image is perfect for your entry, I love it and I'm glad I stopped to read. Good luck to you!
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I'm glad you mention about the branches in your authors notes.. because at first glance I didn't see that! This image is perfect for your entry, I love it and I'm glad I stopped to read. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a charming piece with subtle yet vivid imagery and the artwork certainly supports the message. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a charming piece with subtle yet vivid imagery and the artwork certainly supports the message. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from adewpearl
lovely presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count
excellent emotional appeal as one imagines these lovers who have spent the whole night together
Brooke
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lovely presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count
excellent emotional appeal as one imagines these lovers who have spent the whole night together
Brooke
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an interesting nature 3-5-3 showing hinting at a love story at sunrise. It meets the criteria of the prompt as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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This is an interesting nature 3-5-3 showing hinting at a love story at sunrise. It meets the criteria of the prompt as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from kiwisteveh
Sometimes by explaining, as you have done in your notes, you take away some of the meaning a reader may find in a poem - I had a slightly different interpretaion of the embrace - nothing to do with the trees...
Pretty poem, though. Good luck.
Steve
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Sometimes by explaining, as you have done in your notes, you take away some of the meaning a reader may find in a poem - I had a slightly different interpretaion of the embrace - nothing to do with the trees...
Pretty poem, though. Good luck.
Steve
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
