haiku (winter winds)
nature 3-5-319 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a clever 3-5-3 poem about nature. I like the image of cold blankets of snow. Poem meets the qualifications of the contest as to form and syllable count, and it is nicely presented. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
This is a clever 3-5-3 poem about nature. I like the image of cold blankets of snow. Poem meets the qualifications of the contest as to form and syllable count, and it is nicely presented. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Jeanie. Glad you liked this chilly 3-5-3 poem. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
This is a nice entry for the prompt.
I enjoyed the alliteration in your first 3 words.
Cold blankets indeed - nothing cosy about those!
Adheres to prompt guidelines and great presentation.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
Hi :)
This is a nice entry for the prompt.
I enjoyed the alliteration in your first 3 words.
Cold blankets indeed - nothing cosy about those!
Adheres to prompt guidelines and great presentation.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Debra. Glad you enjoyed this chilly little poem.
Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Dr. Nad
Winter winds is a beautiful Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt entry. this picture is a beautiful representation for the beauty of the words you have selected. best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
Winter winds is a beautiful Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt entry. this picture is a beautiful representation for the beauty of the words you have selected. best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Dr. Nad. Glad you enjoyed this chilly, little 3-5-3 poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from kiwisteveh
makes me glad I'm in mid-summer.
Suitable topic for this nature 3-5-3 - tough task to come up with something striking in such a short piece.
If there is a weakness here it is that blanket of snow is a somewhat over-used image.
Good luck
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
makes me glad I'm in mid-summer.
Suitable topic for this nature 3-5-3 - tough task to come up with something striking in such a short piece.
If there is a weakness here it is that blanket of snow is a somewhat over-used image.
Good luck
Steve
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Steve. We're in the middle of a brutal winter, and looking forwards to spring. Do appreciate all your comments on this chilly, little 3-5-3 poem. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from pasinger
I didn't like the way you have staggered the text but I guess it gives the theme body, the wind blowing.
Criteria met, it is a haiku and about nature.
Difficult to read and make the count but the content is excellent.
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I didn't like the way you have staggered the text but I guess it gives the theme body, the wind blowing.
Criteria met, it is a haiku and about nature.
Difficult to read and make the count but the content is excellent.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from LeannaP
Hi there,
I really like this haiku.
excellent photo and haiku pairing.
Great use of words to
explain the picture in question.
Interestingly, the snow in the
picture really does resemble
blankets,
Great haiku.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
Hi there,
I really like this haiku.
excellent photo and haiku pairing.
Great use of words to
explain the picture in question.
Interestingly, the snow in the
picture really does resemble
blankets,
Great haiku.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks. Glad you liked the imagery and word choices in this chilly 3-5-3 poem. Appreciate your comments ... ;)
Comment from moovierevuchick
YES! How timely. I appreciate the journey your writing takes the reader through. The pictures depicts a not so warm environment, but your words bring warmth, comfort and hope to the reader. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
YES! How timely. I appreciate the journey your writing takes the reader through. The pictures depicts a not so warm environment, but your words bring warmth, comfort and hope to the reader. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks. Glad you liked this haiku and the picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Jackarrie
I really like this haiku for the nature contest3-5-3, The image enhance it, but it really stand on its own, I can fee the intense cold just reading it.
good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
I really like this haiku for the nature contest3-5-3, The image enhance it, but it really stand on its own, I can fee the intense cold just reading it.
good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Hi Mary = Glad you liked this chilly 3-5-3 nature haiku. Appreciate your comments and ... Congratulations on winning my Brevette Contest!! Way to go. Keep up the great writing!
Cheers ... ;o) Art
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Thanks for the congrats. Mary
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent. First two words portray wind blowing, second line perfect in syllable count, third line "cold blanket" can stand alone and tell the story of the wind. Very well done and unique in the placement of words. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
Excellent. First two words portray wind blowing, second line perfect in syllable count, third line "cold blanket" can stand alone and tell the story of the wind. Very well done and unique in the placement of words. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you liked the word choices in this chilly little 3-5-3 haiku. Appreciate your comments..;)
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Thanks for the reply.