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haiku (winter winds)

nature 3-5-3

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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is a clever 3-5-3 poem about nature. I like the image of cold blankets of snow. Poem meets the qualifications of the contest as to form and syllable count, and it is nicely presented. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Jeanie. Glad you liked this chilly 3-5-3 poem. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Debra White
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Hi :)
This is a nice entry for the prompt.
I enjoyed the alliteration in your first 3 words.
Cold blankets indeed - nothing cosy about those!
Adheres to prompt guidelines and great presentation.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Debra. Glad you enjoyed this chilly little poem.
    Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Winter winds is a beautiful Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt entry. this picture is a beautiful representation for the beauty of the words you have selected. best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Dr. Nad. Glad you enjoyed this chilly, little 3-5-3 poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by Dr. Nad on 11-Feb-2015

    You are very welcome,
    Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from kiwisteveh
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makes me glad I'm in mid-summer.

Suitable topic for this nature 3-5-3 - tough task to come up with something striking in such a short piece.

If there is a weakness here it is that blanket of snow is a somewhat over-used image.

Good luck

Steve

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Steve. We're in the middle of a brutal winter, and looking forwards to spring. Do appreciate all your comments on this chilly, little 3-5-3 poem. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from pasinger
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I didn't like the way you have staggered the text but I guess it gives the theme body, the wind blowing.
Criteria met, it is a haiku and about nature.
Difficult to read and make the count but the content is excellent.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

Comment from LeannaP
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Hi there,
I really like this haiku.
excellent photo and haiku pairing.
Great use of words to
explain the picture in question.
Interestingly, the snow in the
picture really does resemble
blankets,
Great haiku.
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks. Glad you liked the imagery and word choices in this chilly 3-5-3 poem. Appreciate your comments ... ;)
Comment from moovierevuchick
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YES! How timely. I appreciate the journey your writing takes the reader through. The pictures depicts a not so warm environment, but your words bring warmth, comfort and hope to the reader. Great job!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks. Glad you liked this haiku and the picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;)
Comment from Jackarrie
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I really like this haiku for the nature contest3-5-3, The image enhance it, but it really stand on its own, I can fee the intense cold just reading it.

good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Hi Mary = Glad you liked this chilly 3-5-3 nature haiku. Appreciate your comments and ... Congratulations on winning my Brevette Contest!! Way to go. Keep up the great writing!

    Cheers ... ;o) Art
reply by Jackarrie on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the congrats. Mary
Comment from samsaysagain
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Excellent. First two words portray wind blowing, second line perfect in syllable count, third line "cold blanket" can stand alone and tell the story of the wind. Very well done and unique in the placement of words. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you liked the word choices in this chilly little 3-5-3 haiku. Appreciate your comments..;)
reply by samsaysagain on 11-Feb-2015
    Thanks for the reply.