Reviews from

Nature's Show

3-5-3 form

93 total reviews 
Comment from Gloria ....
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


Dear Linda, yes indeed nature truly is a wonder to behold and a cinema of magnificent proportions. Even in this winter that has been a little heavy on the show rather than tell side. Very smartly written. Love you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    HI Sweetie, always a pleasure to see you...don't mind the snow...but we are in for record lows tomorrow...yeah!!! ekkkk...LOL..thank you ...you sweet thing you...for a wonderful review...and your wonderful stars...I love the picture...I am s picture person...LOL...just not mine...LOL...love ya too!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Capricorn30
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A pretty picture, Linda--a well-penned poem to complement;
Nature indeed displays many lovely visions, beautiful sights to behold;
Indeed a show for us all, easy to notice earth's perfection.
Thoughts of spring come to mind when I look at your artwork--as all is white around here--I'm tired of the monochrome winter!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi Margaret, LOL...I love the snow...but we are looking at record lows tomorrow...going to stay in my PJ's and cuddle in the blanket...LOL...it does look like Spring in that picture...I love it...natures show...thank you so much sweet girl...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by Capricorn30 on 13-Feb-2015
    ~Aw, you're very welcome Linda;
    Yes, temperatures here too are cold--only 4 degrees predicted for Sunday--that's supposed to be a high--yikes-- blankets and coffee on tap this weekend!~
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    LOL...me too!!! burrrrr...luff xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Oh, that is so lovely! What a beautiful 3-5-3 poem, and what a wonderful illustration to go with it. This is a perfect contest entry, it has everything! Good luck! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi Sandra, so good to see you...it came in second with a few others...smiling...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from lancellot
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You know this is a perfectly worded little poem. I like the truth of it. At one time and today still in dome places, people sat in chairs, or stood under the stairs and just watched the free show, that was never repeated. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    HI Lancellot, thank you for a wonderful review...and you so right...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from PatVallesMangan
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I love your metaphoric use of nature's show, as a cinema. As we await spring in a very cold NYC, I want to jump right in there. All writing prompts were met in such a beautiful presentation. The colors come together with the haiku, in this lovely dedication to the wonderful, colorful, happy time of spring. Good luck in the contest! Pat :)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    HI Pat, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I came in second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from alexisleech
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I never know exactly what to say with regard to a three line poem but you have managed to fit into the writing prompt guidelines, and also pack a punch with your words and presentation.
Well done, and good luck in the competition.

Alexis x

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi Alexis, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from tfawcus
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A constantly moving picture of continuing interest. A never-ending story. How infinitely preferable to transient celluloid images cobbled together for our entertainment.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi Tony, Thank you sir for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from reconciled
Exceptional
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Hello Sweet Linda...-smile- you know how am about three liners...but this is what "they" teach its all about...showing a panoramic view in chosen few words....exceptional Dear...love Michael

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi Michael, thank you so much for your wonderful stars...sometimes you really have to think for these three liners...I am so glad you like it...you ya too!!! Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
Excellent
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I don't know the rules of grammar syntax and satori for three five three, but I can understand this one, and the syllables count out so I rate it as excellent, in my opinion.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi LIJ, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from juliebookly
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Wow. I love this. Amazing poem, poignant and full of meaning in spite of the restricting conditions of writing. It sums it all up. Welldone

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    HI Julie, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo