Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hahaha! What a great senryu -- even the note 'constipated rhythm' was a hoot. None worth a shit is soooo perfect. It's a good thing I've been regular lately or I might not have seen the humor. Never! I will never lose the ability to laugh. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

Thanks, Lou. Am playing catch-up again, but managed to work on my script a little. Did you have your reading yet?

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

LOL at the pun, Shari.

I'd recommend a very hot and spicy Indian curry, washed down with 4 pints of real ale to remedy any 'lack of movement'. ;-)

Thanks for the smile.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

Sounds like that would render someone unconscious!
Hugs,
Shari

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

Bravo! This has to be one of the funniest senryus I've ever read. The image is perfect as well. Having just got over a tummy bug that had me running to the loo every five minutes, I had to take pills that had the opposite effect. Now I'll probably be bunged up for days!

Alexis x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

I'm laughing at your detailed review. I don't know which is worse - to be plugged up or washed out.
Shari

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

LOL is that Dumb or Dumber? Your poem is funny, clever use of word play, and a good ad for enemas. Enjoyable and very fun to read, Shari.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

It is from D and D which was hilarious BTW. Thanks for all the kudos.

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

constipated rhythm senryu (ten laxative brands) This is indeed a humorous poem you have created here. Perhaps next time some Sunlight soap will do the trick. Big chief no shit, big shit, no chief. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

You threw me a curve with the chief talk. Now I get it. LOL

reply by chasennov on 29-Jan-2015

I knew you would.

Comment from Donya Quijote

Excellent

Picture is worth a thousand words. Ouch!!! No relief after taking ten different medications? Time for an enema. Funny, witty and humorous. Hope your not basing this on some personal experience...

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2015

Unfortunately, my hubby doesn't eat enough roughage or fiber. Does that answer your question?

reply by Donya Quijote on 29-Jan-2015

Poor guy....

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Hmmmmmmm
And where do we draw inspiration? The loo....I do too
There ....confessions of Fanstorians
What's left? Only paperwork...
Loved this ...you are getting a re-poot-ation
God bless

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

Smart ass! LOL

Comment from Debbie Noland

Excellent

This is great. The ambiguity of that last line is super clever. The fact that every word in that last line is a single syllable punctuates your disdain.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

I have to credit the last line to hubby. Actually, it's his big problem. :-)

Comment from alf collier

Exceptional

hi Spitfire. I just loved this! you have often displayed the same kind of warped humour I enjoy so much and you have not let me down with this piece. Loved it, alf

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

Wow! Thanks for the gem of a review topped off with a neon plus.
Warped humor--I like that rep. :-)

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I must've watched this movie five times, what a great image! If I recall correctly he definitly produced! And then the toilet broke and he was left embarrassed because he couldn't flush.. too funny! Thanks for giving me a good laugh tonite!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015

Was that from Dumb and Dumber? I found it on Google Images and thought it looked familiar. Anyway, it suited the poem. Thanks for the neat review and rest of the story.

reply by Dawny53 on 29-Jan-2015

yep, dumb and dumber. Hilarious!