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Porn in the Drum

band booster parent story (PLEASE READ before judging)

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Comment from Genya
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Hi Pat, children and young people do all sorts of strange things. Putting a picture inside a drum.... now what was the point of that. Guess it was just some sort of childish prank but one that could upset other people. Really nice that she could turn to you for help. She knew she could rely on you ad that is really special with your people. Picture burnt, wonder if anyone ever found out what had happened to it. Genya

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    I wrote this because someone else had posted something that reminded me of the story, so thought it would be a fun write. Were you shocked to see the words porn and Patricia on this post?
reply by Genya on 20-Jan-2015
    To be honest, yes, it did take me back a bit but I put it down to getting the point across..... Genya
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Here is what my middle daughter had to say about the story.
    Mom,I am so glad you were a band parent! You helped keep everyone honest! I know kids respected you for it!

Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Patricia

A fun story about how boys got great pleasure from looking at naked ladies, so they would have thought that one of the lads took the picture.

A good true story of a true past event.

Mary

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks Mary for the review.
Comment from rjuselius
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this is a fine literary piece. i know it is supposed to be amusing but i found it a bit tedious. the concept is funny but the execution lacks finesse in my humble opinion.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing dear patricia!
rebekka x

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Pat,

You go, girlfriend! Way to go. That was great the girl came to you.

I bet the boys wondered what happened for sure, and/or wondered if they were going to catch heck for it.

Good job!!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the review. Check the comments made in the reviews.
Comment from MelB
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Boys! It was nice that the girl felt comfortable enough to tell you and that you both did something about the picture. Hopefully, the boys at least figured out someone was on to them.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks for the review. I do hope the boys sweated for a while about where the picture went.
Comment from GracieAnn
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Pat, this is an interesting story from the past that makes the reader think about what the eye sees forever in the mind. Good moral to the story. :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
    Thanks Gracie fr the nice review. I wanted to moral to show.