My Little Book of 5-7-5's
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Comment from tfawcus
Wow! It sounds as though you were lucky to escape, Debra! I take a bath to relax, not to be bombarded by herbal bits and pieces. An amusing anecdote! I think I'll stick to a shower this morning! LOL
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Wow! It sounds as though you were lucky to escape, Debra! I take a bath to relax, not to be bombarded by herbal bits and pieces. An amusing anecdote! I think I'll stick to a shower this morning! LOL
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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LOL! Got to admit, Tony, I much prefer a shower! Thanks for your great feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Imogen JH
I widnae dunk mae heid in tha watter.
Seriously, never heard of it. Glad of your author notes explaining it. It does sound nice, but I think I's stick to bath salts myself.
Now that I know what it is, the 5-7-5 comes across as a well written piece. Nicely selected background pink as well. But what is that stuff? Looks like there's a strawberry in there.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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I widnae dunk mae heid in tha watter.
Seriously, never heard of it. Glad of your author notes explaining it. It does sound nice, but I think I's stick to bath salts myself.
Now that I know what it is, the 5-7-5 comes across as a well written piece. Nicely selected background pink as well. But what is that stuff? Looks like there's a strawberry in there.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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It's bits of flower Imogen! Thanks for your fun feedback :) Love, Debra x
Comment from gypsycaravan
Never heard of them. Could they be wrapped loosely in a netting or tulle prior to their explosion so they could remain in the bath water similar to tea in a teabag? Sounds heavenly. Hope you're recovering quickly. Nice poetry.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Never heard of them. Could they be wrapped loosely in a netting or tulle prior to their explosion so they could remain in the bath water similar to tea in a teabag? Sounds heavenly. Hope you're recovering quickly. Nice poetry.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Brilliant idea gypsycaravan! That sounds like the perfect solution :) Thank you for your kind and helpful comments. Kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from Domino 2
Great fun notes, Debs.
Excellent over-the-top alliteration.
The only 'bath bomb' I get is when my rubber duck farts and 'follows through'...but I've led a 'sheltered' life. ;-)
Thanks for the fun read.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Great fun notes, Debs.
Excellent over-the-top alliteration.
The only 'bath bomb' I get is when my rubber duck farts and 'follows through'...but I've led a 'sheltered' life. ;-)
Thanks for the fun read.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Pfffft! You're too funny, Ray!
Thanks for the mental image you just gave me of you in the bath with your rubber duck!
Cheers! Debs x
Comment from Smoothiecool
your 5-7-5 few words portray the message well of the floaty bits after the bath bomb explodes
good visual
flows
cheers Smoothiecool
yes bath bombs do make the bath a pleasant experience
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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your 5-7-5 few words portray the message well of the floaty bits after the bath bomb explodes
good visual
flows
cheers Smoothiecool
yes bath bombs do make the bath a pleasant experience
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Thank you Smoothicool for your feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra
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most welcome my friend...SC <:. Faye
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh she meant well. Hope all is okay. That is all you needed with your busy kids.
I understand. I can write now...they are older and live far away.
Nicely done and fun to read. especially the authors notes
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Oh she meant well. Hope all is okay. That is all you needed with your busy kids.
I understand. I can write now...they are older and live far away.
Nicely done and fun to read. especially the authors notes
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Hi Barb :) She definitely did mean well, bless her.... and I really enjoyed the soak once I'd fished out the floaters! Kindest regards as always, Debra