Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "senryu (muse works fast)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from mermaids
Muses work fast is a great line,they sometime work fast and the second line fits the first. The muse does satisfy the writer's itch. Excellent 5-7-5 form that describes well the life of a writer.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Muses work fast is a great line,they sometime work fast and the second line fits the first. The muse does satisfy the writer's itch. Excellent 5-7-5 form that describes well the life of a writer.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, mermaids. Appeciate your insightful comments.
Comment from boxergirl
HaHa! Rank results for sure. No time for hygiene. Perfect picture to compliment your senryu. It has been humorous also watching all of our posts popping up faster than usual. 8-)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
HaHa! Rank results for sure. No time for hygiene. Perfect picture to compliment your senryu. It has been humorous also watching all of our posts popping up faster than usual. 8-)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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I can't believe the amount of PM's and Reviews. Can't find time to write one, let alone two a day.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This picture is so cool. It resembles me on a good day. Ha! Your words come across in the right way to show what you mean and give the reader a good understanding. I enjoyed reading this, my friend. Thank you for sharing it.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
This picture is so cool. It resembles me on a good day. Ha! Your words come across in the right way to show what you mean and give the reader a good understanding. I enjoyed reading this, my friend. Thank you for sharing it.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Eigle, as always for the sweet reply.
Comment from Domino 2
Very clever and topical write at this time on site when many are posting their arses off to get an early high ranking, Shari.
I interpret 'rank' as having a double meaning - one being the obvious, and maybe the other being smelly ('rank').
No way can I keep up with this posting free for all, but I would still accept a review from you to help keep me in the new top hundred or so. LOL.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Very clever and topical write at this time on site when many are posting their arses off to get an early high ranking, Shari.
I interpret 'rank' as having a double meaning - one being the obvious, and maybe the other being smelly ('rank').
No way can I keep up with this posting free for all, but I would still accept a review from you to help keep me in the new top hundred or so. LOL.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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If someone posts two, I'll pick the best one to rate and delete the other. The only way to keep up! I'm so behind in reviewing, but trust me, you're not on my throwaway list.
Hugs,
Shari
Comment from Sasha
Ah, yes. It is that time of year again when so many feel the need to write, write, write in the hope of making the top 10, even if only for a few days. It is fun to start the year on an even level with everyone else. Very nice work with this one, I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Ah, yes. It is that time of year again when so many feel the need to write, write, write in the hope of making the top 10, even if only for a few days. It is fun to start the year on an even level with everyone else. Very nice work with this one, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Sasha. A fresh start is good and six posts keeps us busy. I don't think two centers should count. That makes it too easy to put on anything knowing it will probably get at least two reviews, yet keep you in the running. Sigh...
Comment from catch22
Hi Shari. It's so true that people are feeling the excitement and frenzy of new rankings, especially when the number to rank went up to six posts. Great word economy in this commentary poem. Happy new year.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Hi Shari. It's so true that people are feeling the excitement and frenzy of new rankings, especially when the number to rank went up to six posts. Great word economy in this commentary poem. Happy new year.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Ah, I thought I remembered it being lower last year. Tom gets a longer holiday now. LOL
Comment from mikemagine
Everything about this is cool. I like the message, the humorous sense of urgency:-) I also like the colors. The picture is funny!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Everything about this is cool. I like the message, the humorous sense of urgency:-) I also like the colors. The picture is funny!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Like the colors?!! Now that's hilarious.
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Lol. Well, I guess I just couldn't imagine this in any other color-combo:-)
Mike
Comment from rama devi
Ha ha ha--great ironic pun in the closing line, dear friend. It's so silly how people think those rankings mean anything at all. This has, in spite of itself, fine poetic devices with superb word economy and consonance of S, F and T in all lines. Bravo. Great picture choice too. Ha ha ha
Chuckling,
rd
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
Ha ha ha--great ironic pun in the closing line, dear friend. It's so silly how people think those rankings mean anything at all. This has, in spite of itself, fine poetic devices with superb word economy and consonance of S, F and T in all lines. Bravo. Great picture choice too. Ha ha ha
Chuckling,
rd
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Ranking makes FS more like a board game, but never a bored game. :-)
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Ha ha ha! :)
Comment from gypsycaravan
I think with the new rankings, all the muses are gonna see some overtime rewards in their paychecks. The trick is to keep them busy the rest of the year. Ha. Your senior and choice of artwork is always top-notch.
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
I think with the new rankings, all the muses are gonna see some overtime rewards in their paychecks. The trick is to keep them busy the rest of the year. Ha. Your senior and choice of artwork is always top-notch.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
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With the abundance of posts, I have more chances to win Member Pumps and LL's. THat's the bright side. :-)
Comment from kiwijenny
I know it's rank right....enough to make us crank out proses and poems so furiously fast to make us rank....hence cranky muses to amuse us as your poem certainly did.
God bless
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
I know it's rank right....enough to make us crank out proses and poems so furiously fast to make us rank....hence cranky muses to amuse us as your poem certainly did.
God bless
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, kiwi. Boy, is it hard to keep up!