Truly Baffling
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very short but shows an understanding of how we would act in this situation that you write about. Trying to look relaxed and unconcerned but inwardly in turmoil. I would have liked to have seen a longer piece enlarging on the subject. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Very short but shows an understanding of how we would act in this situation that you write about. Trying to look relaxed and unconcerned but inwardly in turmoil. I would have liked to have seen a longer piece enlarging on the subject. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sonaleeka
So good to read your poem . Very refreshing and amazingly written .
I am glad to read your poem . Thanks for sharing
God bless.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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So good to read your poem . Very refreshing and amazingly written .
I am glad to read your poem . Thanks for sharing
God bless.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sanku
Oh this is a sad introspection.'what was wrong with me?' This poem is a condensed story ,describes a cameo of a woman sitting alone with a story behind her loneliness.'but he left so abruptly'-is a great closing lines ,leaving the reader with endless imagination.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Oh this is a sad introspection.'what was wrong with me?' This poem is a condensed story ,describes a cameo of a woman sitting alone with a story behind her loneliness.'but he left so abruptly'-is a great closing lines ,leaving the reader with endless imagination.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Truly Baffling' is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review a poem of this standard.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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'Truly Baffling' is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review a poem of this standard.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Mark Schardine, you're very welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Dom G Robles
From this poem, it 's source of a wander why the lover left the lady alone and he lady still feel being unperturbed by the sudden change of event. Undoubtedly, the writer says, the lady is attractive, but for what reason the man left is a wonder.
It's some kind of a poem that has left something on the void.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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From this poem, it 's source of a wander why the lover left the lady alone and he lady still feel being unperturbed by the sudden change of event. Undoubtedly, the writer says, the lady is attractive, but for what reason the man left is a wonder.
It's some kind of a poem that has left something on the void.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from victor 66
Someone said, "You can find the most beautiful woman in the world, but you can bet there's already some guy that's tired of taking her crap". This lady may be of those "that's fun to look at, but you wouldn't want to own her". Your poem has a message, and I like it.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Someone said, "You can find the most beautiful woman in the world, but you can bet there's already some guy that's tired of taking her crap". This lady may be of those "that's fun to look at, but you wouldn't want to own her". Your poem has a message, and I like it.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jay Squires
"Suddenly" in the first line plays so well against the "abruptly" of the last line.
One wonders what she is hiding that she looks relaxed, confident. Is it because she is aware of her attractiveness? Has she used her good looks as a weapon against him? Why did he leave her so abruptly?
Open questions make for good poetry.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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"Suddenly" in the first line plays so well against the "abruptly" of the last line.
One wonders what she is hiding that she looks relaxed, confident. Is it because she is aware of her attractiveness? Has she used her good looks as a weapon against him? Why did he leave her so abruptly?
Open questions make for good poetry.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from boxergirl
Good job with this poem about a truly baffling situation for a girl who seems to not be used to be abandoned. Picture compliments and makes the reader ponder the different scenarios.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Good job with this poem about a truly baffling situation for a girl who seems to not be used to be abandoned. Picture compliments and makes the reader ponder the different scenarios.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from words
I enjoyed this obsevation based verse.
I get the sense that this is told from a male's point of view.
Why, indeed, would a man leave the side of a lovely woman.
In my version of the verse, she sends him awayt and is truly unperterbed by his absense. LOL Hugs, d
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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I enjoyed this obsevation based verse.
I get the sense that this is told from a male's point of view.
Why, indeed, would a man leave the side of a lovely woman.
In my version of the verse, she sends him awayt and is truly unperterbed by his absense. LOL Hugs, d
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Earthlover
What a great little poem with a shocking piece of her new reality. This is interesting and thought provoking. It could happen to anyone at anytime. Life is never stable, and the unexpected can sometimes happen. I really like the image of the girl. Thanks for sharing,
Earthlover
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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What a great little poem with a shocking piece of her new reality. This is interesting and thought provoking. It could happen to anyone at anytime. Life is never stable, and the unexpected can sometimes happen. I really like the image of the girl. Thanks for sharing,
Earthlover
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your review.