The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 114 "Beyond bright blue"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Trybuck
You did an excellent job of telling about Jesus before time began and right on to the cross and beyond using only "B" words. Well done, Buck
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You did an excellent job of telling about Jesus before time began and right on to the cross and beyond using only "B" words. Well done, Buck
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thanks Buck, I must admit this one was a challenge. I appreciate your fine comments. :-)
Comment from elizvinod
Nice poem. Starting every line with the letter B. It is very difficult to write such poem with a beautiful meaning in it. Very Nice work. I think you should explain more about the work in the writing prompt.
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Nice poem. Starting every line with the letter B. It is very difficult to write such poem with a beautiful meaning in it. Very Nice work. I think you should explain more about the work in the writing prompt.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thank you, I am never sure if we are allowed to write much if any in the authors note. When the contest is over, I will go back to the poem.. I appreciate your interest and suggestion. :-)
Comment from tfawcus
Brilliant badinage beautifully betiding biblical beliefs. Bravo! Best benison brought before blasé brethren being bombarded by b's. Be blessed, brother. Bye, bye.
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Brilliant badinage beautifully betiding biblical beliefs. Bravo! Best benison brought before blasé brethren being bombarded by b's. Be blessed, brother. Bye, bye.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Smile.... not a brother... but I will take this wonderful comment any day. Thank you so much. :-)
Comment from Eigle Rull
This would be extremely hard for me to accomplish. However, you have done it with spectacular beauty. The picture is nice, but the words are even better. And all of them start with a B. It was fun to read, my friend.
Always with respect,
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This would be extremely hard for me to accomplish. However, you have done it with spectacular beauty. The picture is nice, but the words are even better. And all of them start with a B. It was fun to read, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
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And thank you as always for reading. It was also a challenge to write. :-)
Comment from rjpurdy
Well done. Great depth, thoughtful. Technically solid the poem flowed well with good progression. Nicely done and good luck in the voting.
Peace & Grace - rjpurdy
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Well done. Great depth, thoughtful. Technically solid the poem flowed well with good progression. Nicely done and good luck in the voting.
Peace & Grace - rjpurdy
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and affirming comments. :-)