Until The Waters Flow Again
Stacked 5-7-5 free verse13 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
laughter sooths me - soothes
bones lay in repose - lie
the syllable count is good in all lines
powerful imagery and vivid descriptive detail
sky fills with life - good consonance and assonance
Brooke
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laughter sooths me - soothes
bones lay in repose - lie
the syllable count is good in all lines
powerful imagery and vivid descriptive detail
sky fills with life - good consonance and assonance
Brooke
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from Eric1
This is a wonderfully written stacking 5-7-5 for this particular competition my friend, there is a lot of deep meaning in your beautiful words, good luck in the contest.
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This is a wonderfully written stacking 5-7-5 for this particular competition my friend, there is a lot of deep meaning in your beautiful words, good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from NurseBarb
River flows swiftly
with my life's cells-tsunami
waterfall turns red
Brilliant metaphors throughout the entire poem. I love this entry. Beautiful presentation. Image beautiful.
Very well written and I wish you good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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River flows swiftly
with my life's cells-tsunami
waterfall turns red
Brilliant metaphors throughout the entire poem. I love this entry. Beautiful presentation. Image beautiful.
Very well written and I wish you good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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You wouldn't believe how delirious and delighted I am with your wonderful review!! I'm so pleased that you are my first review. Now I won't care when I get a three with, "I don't understand any of this." Thank you so very much. It is so satisfying when someone understands what you've tried to do. :) I don't know the icon for a summersault!!
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You are so very welcome, my friend.