Comment from adewpearl

Good

un/lim/it/ed/pal/ette - 6 syllables
it's beat - drop the apostrophe
your other lines are in good syllable count
lovely descriptive detail and effective imagery and inspiring tone
since this is a syllable count contest, the rating is a 4, but if you fix that one line, please let me know and I will gladly raise the rating
Brooke

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you Brooke I will fix

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Hi Brooke, have had time to rework the poem a little, Take another look as I always appreciate a better rating. :-)

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Panoramic view, indeed that's a wonderful expressed 5/7/5 poem. Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it,God bless yo,Hugs!lakeport,

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank as always for reading :-)

reply by lakeport on 01-Oct-2014

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Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for this particular competition my friend, with a strong spiritual message it works very well, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thanks Eric1,

reply by Eric1 on 01-Oct-2014

you are very welcome dear friend.

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

Excellent entry for this stacked 5/7/5 contest. I love how you incorporated God into each stanza and the "awe" that he created and commands. Very well written with a lovely image as well. Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Nicely paired and stacked :-)

The flow from two dimensional view, to soaring flight, to the sound of rain, to the all dimensional essence of eternity was smoothly executed :-)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thanks Leineco, what a great review you have given this one

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Beautiful message in your poem. The chosen artwork and formatting complement to make a great presentation.

The best of luck in the contest

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)


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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

I will keep smiling and thank you so much for reading..