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William, where are you?

3yr old boy goes missing.

23 total reviews 
Comment from gypsycaravan
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This is so terribly sad. Has there been any further word on Wlliam? Your poem flows very well and the message is well expressed. Thank you for posting.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Hello friend, No, nothing. A strange business - we believe he was snatched in his Spiderman's suit. If he is alive, let us hope he is well, if not, God has him in His care. Bless you gypsycaravan.
reply by gypsycaravan on 28-Sep-2014
    I hope the family will get some answer, be it good or bad. I can't imagine going through life never knowing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Australia waits - the family must be going mad with grief. Thanks new friend. :-)Kay XX
reply by gypsycaravan on 28-Sep-2014
    Any chance he may have just wandered off? How long has he been missing? They are on my prayer list now. The poor grandmother. She must feel devastated that he went missing while under her care. How awful for their family.
Comment from w.j.debi
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It is heart rending to hear a child has been snatched. The poor person who was watching the child at the time is probably going through all the "what if I had's..." that there could possibly be.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Indeed, grandma would be blaming herself for not being with him. Thank you for reading - Australia waits for news. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Hi, Kay. This special poem could only have been written by a sensitive soul such as yourself. Thank you for telling of this boy's situation so that we can offer up our own prayers for his return. Hugs, Bev

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Hello my dear friend Bev, thank you for reading and praying. We cannot find William who was snatched two weeks ago. No sign of his being was found. Police are baffled. Children belong to god but not this way. Hugs back darling girl XX K.
reply by Writingfundimension on 28-Sep-2014
    That doesn't bode well for the family, Kay. I'm sorry to receive that news. I totally agree that children belong to God and that they have a special place at his side.

    You're very welcome, my friend. And thank you for your very kind vote and note in the BOM contest.

    Hugs, Bev
Comment from Nosha17
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How terribly sad, these child abductions or missing children seem to become more common all the time. Hopefully, with everyone's prayers and efforts he will be found. Good use of rhyming and well expressed emotions. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Thanks for reading Faye. Not a happy subject but until the family has closure we need to pray. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from LIJ Red
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Sad to hear that there are the same kinds of scum Down Under. Here in the States odds are against a missing child being recovered unharmed. Excellent ABAB poem.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Thanks for reading; don't have a lot of this happening but yes, usually the child is not found. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Kay, I have prayed now...and will pray tonight...I can't even imagine losing a child...may God stay by this little boys side...and he is found...safe...may prayers bring William home...God Bless him...you have a kind heart Kay...Love Linda

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Linda, Thank you for reading; can't stop feeling for William. There was no trace of his going - police are baffled. I know god loves him. Love, Kay XX
reply by l.raven on 28-Sep-2014
    you are so welcome...he is now in my prayers...you just never know what can happen...love xxoo
Comment from Eigle Rull
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This very well written plea and praise needs to be read by the right people. I love the way your words tell of the love for him. Sweet words that we all hope will bring him home to a family of love.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Eigle, Thank you for reading; can't get William out of my mind - the family needs closure. And so Australia waits for news. Bless you my friend. Kay XX
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Oh, how sad Kay. The site is so depressing this morning with all the bad news. God help the searchers find the missing child and return him safely to the arms of his family. God comfort the bereaved parents of this small child. Give them the peace of knowing. Nancy

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Nancy, Thank you for caring; can't get William out of my mind. The family needs news or closure. Blessings, Kay.
reply by nancy_e_davis on 28-Sep-2014
    Yes they do. What a tragedy. God be with him where ever he may be.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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It is becoming a very twisted world when children are not even safe in their own yards. This is a wonderfully written call to action and I will be sure to include this young man in my daily prayers. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Bless you for reading; can't get William out of my mind. The family needs news or closure. Thank you, Kay. XX
Comment from amrosh10
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I liked it. the rhyme is good and nature not forced in general. the theme is good not so frightening but OK. I liked the tragedy of the lost son and I liked some images but the grief-mask is not appropriate it`s a true grief not a mask. thanks.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    This three year old has been missing for two weeks - we pray for his safe return. Thanks for reading.
reply by amrosh10 on 29-Sep-2014
    My God is this real. I`m sorry!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Yes, amrosh10 - William was taken on 12th of Sept. Australia is waiting for news and the parents need some closure. Blessings, Kay.
reply by amrosh10 on 02-Oct-2014
    Did you hear anything about William? I wish
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
    Only today has the mother come on TV to ask for the public's help. I find that strange? If the police have no clues...why would we? Thanks for asking. :-( XX