Upcoming Season--Sea of White
Pissonnet (pi so nay)15 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Debbie;
good luck in the contest with this is a very formidable Pissonnet contest entry. Also, each syllable, word in of the line fits to the qualifications of the contest. It is very well written and your imagination is very clever and witty along with being inventive and clearly ingeniously creative.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Debbie.
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Debbie;
good luck in the contest with this is a very formidable Pissonnet contest entry. Also, each syllable, word in of the line fits to the qualifications of the contest. It is very well written and your imagination is very clever and witty along with being inventive and clearly ingeniously creative.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Debbie.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
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You are so welcome Debbie
Comment from Trybuck
I hope that sea of white stays well to the north and west of us. We had enough of that last year... Well done with your entry, Buck
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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I hope that sea of white stays well to the north and west of us. We had enough of that last year... Well done with your entry, Buck
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Jay Squires
You are really getting into the Pissonnet, aren't you. I don't know whether you realize it or not, but it is almost impossible, at least for me, to review. Don't think me mean, Debbie, but I'll have to start passing on them. I'll stick around, though, for other stuff you write.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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You are really getting into the Pissonnet, aren't you. I don't know whether you realize it or not, but it is almost impossible, at least for me, to review. Don't think me mean, Debbie, but I'll have to start passing on them. I'll stick around, though, for other stuff you write.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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You're not mean. It is hard to write reviews which are longer than the poem. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from royowen
A nice entry in this Pissonet poetry contest Debbie, i like the way you have woven the artwork and combined it with the poem. It's funny the winter poems are start be rolled out already. Well done, good luck, blessings. Roy
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A nice entry in this Pissonet poetry contest Debbie, i like the way you have woven the artwork and combined it with the poem. It's funny the winter poems are start be rolled out already. Well done, good luck, blessings. Roy
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
Comment from stroncoso1
Yes, it emulates a Shakespearean sonnet with just the perfect rhyme scheme. Your 14 single syllabic count works throughout in your appropriately titled poem, "Upcoming Season --Sea of White." Nicely done.
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Yes, it emulates a Shakespearean sonnet with just the perfect rhyme scheme. Your 14 single syllabic count works throughout in your appropriately titled poem, "Upcoming Season --Sea of White." Nicely done.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie