Your Kids Are Safe With Us
Halloween 5-7-514 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, if I had children I would be right there with them. should be lets instead of let's. good luck in the contest.
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, if I had children I would be right there with them. should be lets instead of let's. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
Soup's on...! Love these dark, humorous offerings. Although with your title: Your Kids are Safe With Us - I was anticipating a white paneled van with blood seeping out the back door. I guess a boiling cauldron will do! Great entry - good luck. AT=/
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Soup's on...! Love these dark, humorous offerings. Although with your title: Your Kids are Safe With Us - I was anticipating a white paneled van with blood seeping out the back door. I guess a boiling cauldron will do! Great entry - good luck. AT=/
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a true Halloween entry which follows the requirements nicely. I like your creative twist on a touch of Hansel & Gretel to get your message across. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is a true Halloween entry which follows the requirements nicely. I like your creative twist on a touch of Hansel & Gretel to get your message across. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Oooo bubble bubble toil and trouble.....this is finger food for thought....
Witch soup is on? I get it ...bean soup...human bean that is....
Yikes yikes yikes....stir it ...you never know
God bless
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Oooo bubble bubble toil and trouble.....this is finger food for thought....
Witch soup is on? I get it ...bean soup...human bean that is....
Yikes yikes yikes....stir it ...you never know
God bless
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2014