Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

This is indeed a really great picture, but also your write as well. It's a very good entry, one of the best I've come across so far!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you so very much Dawny for your supporting review. Pili

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are creative, healing and sad. The artwork
is colorful and enhances the theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Harmony for a terrific comment. Pili

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a perfect naani contest entry. It is well written and is full of wonderful imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Teresa. Pili

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent naani write, pili pubal, the moon still tries to break through the clouds, but sad memories cannot be completely concealed. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Wonderful comment , thank you so much. Pili

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"moon ethereal veils
tendrils of silver light
love wounds repair
sad memories left behind"
getting over a lost love is always a tricky business. but i think your naani describes the emotional turmoil well!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you so very much. Great review. Pili

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your write
It is a perfect match
It always amazes me when one cant write so few words
yet say so much,
thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you so much , great comment. Pili

reply by misscookie on 16-Sep-2014

You're very welcome. I pray you have a nice week .
Until next time,
Cookie

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

You too my friend. Hugs. Pili

reply by misscookie on 17-Sep-2014

Have a blessed day, until next time.
Cookie

Comment from Lost n Thought

Excellent

I love how simple and beautiful this poem is. The figurative language used really painted a scene in my head. Very well written, great job!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you you so much for a great comment. Pili

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Pili,

The extraordinary artwork is like looking and soaring into the universe, emphasizing your great poem.

Nicely done and presentation. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014

Thank you Jax for a terrific review. Pili

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very original title and I chuckled for a few seconds. I imagined with a sign "Closed for Repairs" in a soft humble light. Lovely work.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thank you Amada for your terrific review. Pili

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Nice naani poem. Should repair be repaired in the third line? Like the imagery of tendrils of silver light. Never thought of the moon that way :)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thank you so much for a great comment and suggestion. Pili