haiku (churning cascade)
Contest sponsor okayed 17 syllables or less.11 total reviews
Comment from NurseBarb
Excellent Haiku. I love the 2nd line "washing worldly debris away". Great alliterations with the washing worldly and fluid free fall. Beautiful image as well. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Excellent Haiku. I love the 2nd line "washing worldly debris away". Great alliterations with the washing worldly and fluid free fall. Beautiful image as well. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thank you.