Liverpool Lovelies
Contest entry: Beatlemania19 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes this just about conjures up the global impact of these youngLiverpudlians as they strung their guitars and gazed upon the Universe thru their musical prism
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Yes this just about conjures up the global impact of these youngLiverpudlians as they strung their guitars and gazed upon the Universe thru their musical prism
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Zanya! Of all the groups out there they are one of the few that are known throughout the world and whose music still lasts. I am so happy you enjoyed this and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Liverpool lovelies
tap into rhythm of life
rock the universe
The Beetles were very well known, you should have a winner here, but as usual you are my winner Dear. Good Luck with the contest.
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Liverpool lovelies
tap into rhythm of life
rock the universe
The Beetles were very well known, you should have a winner here, but as usual you are my winner Dear. Good Luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Debbie! In the end the only real winning is to be yourself and make a few folks smile in the process. I am always grateful for your sincere encouragement and elevating support.
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Reply I am always myself that is why you are always my winner! Take care and have a blessed rest of the day!
Comment from krys123
Mystic Angel;
a very superb and marvelous 5/7/5 syllabic format and I wish you all the luck in winning this contest for this is a tremendous entry and I really mean it.
Your first impression of your imagery is very expressive and truly descriptive throughout the writing and describes the rhythmic enjoyment and dancing of lovers during that era.
Thank you so much for sharing them posting and may the good Lord be with you always Mystic Angel.
Alex
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Mystic Angel;
a very superb and marvelous 5/7/5 syllabic format and I wish you all the luck in winning this contest for this is a tremendous entry and I really mean it.
Your first impression of your imagery is very expressive and truly descriptive throughout the writing and describes the rhythmic enjoyment and dancing of lovers during that era.
Thank you so much for sharing them posting and may the good Lord be with you always Mystic Angel.
Alex
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Alex! It was fun to write and I am tickled that you enjoyed it. I never expect to win, my reward comes from making a person or two smile as that is the best gift of all. I am always grateful for your lovely words of encouragement and support.
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You are so sincerely welcome Mystic Angel and it is more than my pleasure in doing so.
Alex
Comment from adewpearl
No proper nouns are allowed according to contest rules - Liverpool, the name of a city, is a proper noun
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 syllable count
I'd say I like the opening alliteration, but it includes the proper noun
If you do a revision, let me know and I will up the rating
Brooke :-)
I have raised the rating because this misunderstanding was the contest sponsor's fault, not yours
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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No proper nouns are allowed according to contest rules - Liverpool, the name of a city, is a proper noun
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 syllable count
I'd say I like the opening alliteration, but it includes the proper noun
If you do a revision, let me know and I will up the rating
Brooke :-)
I have raised the rating because this misunderstanding was the contest sponsor's fault, not yours
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Brooke! My bad as I thought from the discussion thread she had okayed places and only wished to exclude the names of the Beatles themselves - I must have misunderstood. I am grateful for your feedback.
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I'll have to read the discussion thread, which is something most reviewers never read - contest sponsors should realize this.
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I am asking for further clarification and apologize for the confusion. I know your time is valuable and appreciate the rating regardless of how many stars bestowed.
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I have raised the rating after reading the discussion thread - contest sponsors aren't actually allowed to change the rules once a contest is underway, but that sure isn't your fault.
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No need for you to apologize - the mess up was not of your making
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent 'L' alliteration, MA.
Excellent philosophical words which relate to music and the effect it has on us all.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
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Excellent 'L' alliteration, MA.
Excellent philosophical words which relate to music and the effect it has on us all.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Ray! It was a fun write and I am happy that you liked it. I am very grateful for the kind encouragement and wish you the best in the voting too.
Comment from Loren (7)
:) That they did, and what a subtle way to promote the phenomenon that they were. I never really got into most of their music, but some of it, I have to acknowledge, was really, really good. Loren
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:) That they did, and what a subtle way to promote the phenomenon that they were. I never really got into most of their music, but some of it, I have to acknowledge, was really, really good. Loren
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Loren! I was never too jazzed about their earlier stuff, but as they grew the depth of their lyrics did too. I am happy that you liked this silly scribble and grateful for your kindness in providing such positive feedback.
Comment from GracieAnn
Mystic, this BEATLEMANIA writing prompt entry meets all the requirements and then some. Yes, the world did rock when the FabFour set it on its ear. Great entry. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
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Mystic, this BEATLEMANIA writing prompt entry meets all the requirements and then some. Yes, the world did rock when the FabFour set it on its ear. Great entry. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, GA! It was fun to write and I am thrilled if it brought a smile to your face as I LOVE your warm, sweet smile.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your line 'rock the universe.' I love your image. It is so fitting. I would not change anything. Good job and good luck in the contest. Please read the 'thread' on the contest page. I am sorry if people did not know that it was ok to use other proper nouns (other than the 4 names). I read the thread and responded.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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I like your line 'rock the universe.' I love your image. It is so fitting. I would not change anything. Good job and good luck in the contest. Please read the 'thread' on the contest page. I am sorry if people did not know that it was ok to use other proper nouns (other than the 4 names). I read the thread and responded.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much! And thank you for creating such a fun contest. I am happy you think this a decent contribution and very grateful for the kind feedback.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I think this is a great contest entry on the subject of Beatlemania. I'm old enough to remember when they first came to the United States. It's no exaggeration to say they DID rock our world. Good luck with the excellent entry. :)
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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I think this is a great contest entry on the subject of Beatlemania. I'm old enough to remember when they first came to the United States. It's no exaggeration to say they DID rock our world. Good luck with the excellent entry. :)
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much! I know they have always rocked mine LOL. I think some of the best lyrics ever written about peace and loving one another came from these guys - being different or the first is not always a bad thing. I am happy you enjoyed this and grateful for the kind words of support.
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You're most welcome, MA. :)