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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "a grand canyon"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from Pili Pubul
You created a beautiful image of The Nationa Park in just a few words.
The picture is amazing too. Very good 5-7-5 I wish you
good luck in the contest . Pili
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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You created a beautiful image of The Nationa Park in just a few words.
The picture is amazing too. Very good 5-7-5 I wish you
good luck in the contest . Pili
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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thank you pili! :-)
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Welcome Shelley
Comment from Sasha
This is excellent. It is a terrific entry for this contest. I love the poem and your picture is stunning. I sincerely wish you all the best in the contest too. I love it just as it is and wouldn't change a thing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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This is excellent. It is a terrific entry for this contest. I love the poem and your picture is stunning. I sincerely wish you all the best in the contest too. I love it just as it is and wouldn't change a thing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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thank you sasha! :-)
Comment from nomi338
Tucked away, out of sight. A place to lodge and spend the night. A place to hide from Winter's cold, a place to avoid a wind so bold. I grow cold and shiver even in 90 degree weather, so vivid are your descriptive words.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Tucked away, out of sight. A place to lodge and spend the night. A place to hide from Winter's cold, a place to avoid a wind so bold. I grow cold and shiver even in 90 degree weather, so vivid are your descriptive words.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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cool! thank you nomi! :-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Beautifully written and depicted. I love everything about your poem. It is so serene and mesmerizing. I have never been to the Grand Canyon, but I have hopes to one day. Right now, I will enjoy your striking poem and take in the super picture. I would change nothing. Good job and good luck with the contest. (not sure if you got this--it is still on my computer)
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Beautifully written and depicted. I love everything about your poem. It is so serene and mesmerizing. I have never been to the Grand Canyon, but I have hopes to one day. Right now, I will enjoy your striking poem and take in the super picture. I would change nothing. Good job and good luck with the contest. (not sure if you got this--it is still on my computer)
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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thank you janny :-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
Very good 5-7-5 about a national park. second line - tucks in? or should it be tucked in? Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Very good 5-7-5 about a national park. second line - tucks in? or should it be tucked in? Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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yea, i actually edited - probably while you were reading and reviewing lol! thanx teresa! :-)
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:)