Comment from amada

Excellent

There is a twist of playfulness in this lune contest work. Easy and nice to think about it. Then, there are also stars. Nice work.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from krys123

Excellent

Ine;
is there a simple but very descriptive and expressive piece of poetry or lune that was written very well and let me say good luck in the contest for this is an excellent entry.
The imagery was clear and very descriptive in your imagination was very inventive and ingeniously creative in writing this particular lune.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the sun always shine on your shoulders.
Alex

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by krys123 on 20-Aug-2014

You are so sincerely welcome

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. The moon stands guard over the earth. It shines on special creatures. Then these creatures go to bed and the sun shines. The sun lights the way for entirely different creatures. The sun lets the plants grow while the moon lets the plants sleep. Great work.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from Ronni

Excellent

You are righto on with this space and astrological
configuration and universal nocturnes of sun and moon.
Perfect pic with presentation....thanks for sharing.
Best always, Ronni

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

yes, the moon has to give way to the real light
ending it's reign of the night
A beautiful day in the making as the moon closes his eye

Well done with your entry, Buck

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What an awesome picture you've chosen. Excellent rhyme of light and night in the first line. Your syllable count is 5-7-5, and correct for a lune. We always have some kind of light--moonlight or sunlight. Very aptly expressed in a few words, and best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

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reply by judiverse on 20-Aug-2014

You're so welcome. juldi

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine. Seems you can read my mind. I was just thinking about a poem about sun and moon. LOL I had to think about Marijke.
In a way we are like sun and moon. When I go to sleep,she awakes. You made me remember of that. Love your Lune, I can relate to it, in a different way. Well done!!! Fia
I call you tomorrow....

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

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Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

This is a very cool picture. It goes well with your poem. You are able to say in few wards what you want to put across to the reader. And it is a good job. Straight-forward and real. Nice job, my friend.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in good 5/3/5 syllable count for the Lune form
good internal rhyming in light at night
you create a pleasant scene
as the sun replaces the moonlight once night is done
Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

Hi, robina. I like that picture. Very cool. There isn't anything wrong with the poem, but it seems a bit on the ordinary side. Nothing hit me in the gut (good or bad). Sorry! But I'll be on the lookout for your next one.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine. Thanks for coming back and I tend to agree with you.