Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Horny Shaun"The clue is in the title!
21 total reviews
Comment from gypsycaravan
Ah, how very sad. Happens to many with old age. Cute little limerick. A big horn like that and nothing to spear. Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Ah, how very sad. Happens to many with old age. Cute little limerick. A big horn like that and nothing to spear. Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you gypsycaravan for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from tfawcus
A hilarious limerick in the true tradition of the form. Bawdy and good fun. It's a pity that so many of Shaun's ilk are slaughtered to inflame the libido of others.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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A hilarious limerick in the true tradition of the form. Bawdy and good fun. It's a pity that so many of Shaun's ilk are slaughtered to inflame the libido of others.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you Tony for your great feedback :) kindest regards as always, Debra x
Comment from jmdg1954
Limerick contests are one of my favorite on this site. They are comical and witty and usually get me to snicker. Well done,you've accomplished my goal.
Good luck in the contest... John
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Limerick contests are one of my favorite on this site. They are comical and witty and usually get me to snicker. Well done,you've accomplished my goal.
Good luck in the contest... John
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you john for your great feedback :) kindest regards...
Comment from Imogen JH
Not one hundred percent sure this fits the contest criteria. Using the words wife and porn gives it a human link, and that may put it against the rules. It's a debatable point.
As a limerick goes though. It is bloody funny. I can certainly relate to it.
Within the rules or not. It's a good limerick in it's own right.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Not one hundred percent sure this fits the contest criteria. Using the words wife and porn gives it a human link, and that may put it against the rules. It's a debatable point.
As a limerick goes though. It is bloody funny. I can certainly relate to it.
Within the rules or not. It's a good limerick in it's own right.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Hi Imogen, thanks for your great feedback and glad this tickled your funny bone :) hopefully i complied with the rules as they didn't state that you shouldn't personify the animal... We shall see, I guess! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from RYME4U
Funny. This Limerick is well written and has an amusing slant to it, Very good animal Limerick contest entry. All rules have been followed
Great Job
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Funny. This Limerick is well written and has an amusing slant to it, Very good animal Limerick contest entry. All rules have been followed
Great Job
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Hi ryme4u, thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is actually disgusting, but you have put it into a limerick which plays with the mind to think this is quite alright. I will not go into details, but it is a fine limerick as limericks go.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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This is actually disgusting, but you have put it into a limerick which plays with the mind to think this is quite alright. I will not go into details, but it is a fine limerick as limericks go.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Hi Drew, thank you for your feedback :) I'm sorry you found the content of my limerick disgusting, I didn't mean to cause any offense. In light of this, I appreciate even more so the stars you awarded for my efforts. Thank you again, kindest regards...:)
Comment from Leineco
LMAO!
Randy Rhino goes berserk
leaves his lady torn when twerked
She says "Forget it - back the heck off",
now he & the misses no longer boff!
Very cute :-)
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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LMAO!
Randy Rhino goes berserk
leaves his lady torn when twerked
She says "Forget it - back the heck off",
now he & the misses no longer boff!
Very cute :-)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you lorraine for your fun feedback, glad you appreciated my sense of humor, some didn't (woops!). Kindest regards...:)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
When I first started reading this I was like this is nothing what I thought was going to be like and then at the end I was like this TOTALLY what I thought. LOL. Great job friend
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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When I first started reading this I was like this is nothing what I thought was going to be like and then at the end I was like this TOTALLY what I thought. LOL. Great job friend
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Hi :) Thank you for your great feedback, so happy you appreciated my sense of humor, some didn't, unfortunately (woops!). Kindest regards...:)
Comment from granny goes viral
This is a "snorter". Yeah, I snorted with suppressed laughter when I finished it. Why suppressed? Don't know, cause it was/is funny. Anyway, good job.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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This is a "snorter". Yeah, I snorted with suppressed laughter when I finished it. Why suppressed? Don't know, cause it was/is funny. Anyway, good job.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Hi Granny Goes Viral (great name!) Thank you for your fun feedback, glad you appreciated my sense of humor, some didn't this time, unfortunately! Kindest regards...:)
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Well, I am just a dirty old lady.
Comment from billgrumman
The poor rhino. At least his horn wasn't cut off to be used in Asian Aphrodisiacs. Thanks. I got a laugh out of this poem.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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The poor rhino. At least his horn wasn't cut off to be used in Asian Aphrodisiacs. Thanks. I got a laugh out of this poem.
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback :) kindest regards...